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Photoshoot with Ivory Flame in a Woodlands

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Exif Info:
Exposure: 1/320 at f 2.5
Exposure bias: 0
Exposure program: Manual
Metering mode: Spot
ISO: 200
Focal length: 50mm
Lens: 50mm f/1.4 USM
Camera: Canon EOS 650D
File Type: RAW.

Critique welcomed. I'm aware of a couple of distractions in the foreground, I could have cropped it out, but wanted honest feedback from the community.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 650D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.4 USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:14 Jul 2012 - 12:04 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.4
Aperture:f/2.5
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Photoshoot with Ivory Flame in a Woodlands
Username:pmeswani pmeswani
Uploaded:1 Aug 2012 - 12:42 PM
Votes:Voting Disabled

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canon_stu
canon_stu  11140 forum posts England4 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2012 - 7:01 PM

From the top of her finger down needs cropping, this would work so much better as a headshot

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pmeswani
pmeswani e2 Member 3pmeswani vcard United Kingdom
15 Jul 2012 - 7:11 PM

Hi Canon Stu,

Thanks for your feedback. May I ask why you think that? I am curious and would like to understand the rationale behind your comment.

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Leilani
Leilani  1029 forum posts England3 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2012 - 9:13 PM

Beautiful, as is the model and scene! Smile

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pmeswani
pmeswani e2 Member 3pmeswani vcard United Kingdom
18 Jul 2012 - 5:57 PM

Thanks for your comments Leilani,much appreciated.

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silverfoxey
6 Aug 2013 - 4:49 PM


Quote: From the top of her finger down needs cropping, this would work so much better as a headshot

Thanks for your feedback. May I ask why you think that? I am curious and would like to understand the rationale behind your comment.
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I have to agree with your question to the top above comment left? You have taken the location outside, and the elements are out of your control. Perhaps the foliage is not perfect, but you can correct by cloning. Overall for me the shot works and apart from some cleaning up with further edit, I like it. James Wink

Last Modified By silverfoxey at 6 Aug 2013 - 4:49 PM

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