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Let me have your opinions, good or bad, on this one please

Many Thanks

Steve Walters

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A550
Lens:75-300mm F4.5-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Mar 2013 - 7:32 PM
Focal Length:200mm
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:In the Smoke
Username:Stenk Stenk
Uploaded:3 May 2013 - 9:20 PM
Votes:Voting Disabled

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Balwant
Balwant  3 United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
3 May 2013 - 5:46 PM

Intresting creation, very different from portraits we normally see. Well done

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bluesandtwos
3 May 2013 - 5:57 PM

Stands out from the rest. Nice one.

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chase
chase Critique Team 91118 forum postschase vcard England240 Constructive Critique Points
3 May 2013 - 7:32 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Beautiful light & I love the windswept look of her hair.
I like the idea of the smoke but the two very brightest sections ( under her hair & under her chin) do stand out from the rest of the bg & look a bit odd,quite distracting to tbh. Ther is another,just by her right shoulder but that one is not as bright as the other two.
Nice concept...was the smoke real ?

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abeeror2
abeeror2 e2 Member 2abeeror2 vcard Australia
3 May 2013 - 9:59 PM

Beautiful portrait especially the lighting.

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Eviscera
Eviscera e2 Member 81104 forum postsEviscera vcard United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
3 May 2013 - 10:45 PM

try to angle / resize the b,g to intimate the flow of her hair

Striking image though.

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