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I threatened some while back - see HERE for the full context - and have finally got around to getting a video made on the 5D mk11 up and running and onto You tube --- suffer if you must ....
see The Film
aahh! the learning curve ............
It only went up today so it awaits your crits !!
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very very good, thoroughly enjoyed it, and a god job with the video
was that you?
Indeed it was steve - I thank you
Excellent David! Maybe that could be a new EPZ challenge - instead of self-portraits, self-videos on a theme.
Would we be brave enough? I doubt it!
The first segment is so much like David Lynch. I love the creaking sound and I really like when you appear with the globe - quite sinister, but then that transition of curtain-like change spoils the enjoyment and makes it feel a bit cheap. Maybe a fade to you sat in the chair is all it needed? The words are read out perfectly - very articulate and with meaning, I like the lighting and tight composition...nicely filmed Mrs B. Enjoyable to view and thumbs up from me...and if the feeling of the first section could have been carried through it would taken it a few levels higher.
Thanks CB and Pete - very encouraging -
yes Pete you could be right - the curtain element I stuck with - or chose if you like - as it was literally a 'theatrical' device going from the 'netherworld' into the world of theatre ??
but I take your point - difficult to be to be really disciplined when new to something - one feels the need to experiment with all of it -- ho! ho!
thanks again db
That was great David, really enjoyed it. I do agree with pete about the curtain transition but then again im no expert. Well done. Hoping to get the markII soon but doubt ill produce any films like this
Thanks Gary - appreciate your feed back
Well I'm going to disagree about the curtain effect - I like it and have in fact used a curtain as an opener on many of my videos... it became a bit of a hallmark!
LOL CB that's what I like to hear -
To be honest on looking at it again (and I thought so originally) I quite like the way the body is "torn apart" ...
cheers all - appreciate your responses
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