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critic


11 Apr 2010 5:09PM
Hi,
I know I could re-list this and put it in the critic gallery but I have already re-listed it to day as I brightened it up a little.
Anyway any advice on how I could improve this including the mono conversion would be great.
I have hit an editing block Smile with this and i cannot seem to improve it. I just think there Is something missing with it.
Image

Thanks in advance.

jon

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11 Apr 2010 5:59PM
Hi Jon, It looks good to me !! Smile I like the darker version better !! Smile

Nishad
miptog e2
9 3.5k 61 United Kingdom
11 Apr 2010 6:04PM
Jon

Not sure if you can allow modifications after you have uploaded. May be something to remember for the next upload.
Daffy1 e2
7 337 Ireland
11 Apr 2010 7:09PM
I wouldn't ruffle any feathers,just leave it alone !!Grin Damian
NickParry e2
9 1.0k 79 Wales
11 Apr 2010 7:16PM
It works well IMHO.

Nick Smile
csurry
12 9.2k 92
11 Apr 2010 7:25PM
Downloaded the darker of the two and did a simple granient map of black to white and it really perks up the contrast, but of course that depends if that is the look that you want.
JamesGarfield 5 915 4 United Kingdom
11 Apr 2010 7:28PM
I like version two a little more than version one but in all honestly i'd be happy with either as it's a great shot and they both work.
User_Removed 10 17.9k 8 Norway
11 Apr 2010 8:24PM
In CS4...

+0.14 Exposure and 0.80 Gamma Correction makes an impressive difference on the darker version (for me Smile

FWIW
12 Apr 2010 12:15PM
Many thanks for your feedback and Ideas. I have added it again to the gallery with some of the tips In place.
Image
miptog e2
9 3.5k 61 United Kingdom
12 Apr 2010 4:13PM
Jon

Its a shame that you haven't allowed a mods, as some useful tips could be learnt from other people post work.

Michael
12 Apr 2010 5:47PM
I have forgot to do that yet again. Sad
15 Apr 2010 7:44PM
OK my final edit and this time i have added the MOD tab.
Final Image

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