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    TheWanderer
    11 Apr 2010 - 5:09 PM

    Hi,
    I know I could re-list this and put it in the critic gallery but I have already re-listed it to day as I brightened it up a little.
    Anyway any advice on how I could improve this including the mono conversion would be great.
    I have hit an editing block Smile with this and i cannot seem to improve it. I just think there Is something missing with it.
    Image

    Thanks in advance.

    jon

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    nishad1994
    11 Apr 2010 - 5:59 PM

    Hi Jon, It looks good to me !! Smile I like the darker version better !! Smile

    Nishad

    miptog
    miptog  83532 forum posts United Kingdom61 Constructive Critique Points
    11 Apr 2010 - 6:04 PM

    Jon

    Not sure if you can allow modifications after you have uploaded. May be something to remember for the next upload.

    Daffy1
    Daffy1  6336 forum posts Ireland
    11 Apr 2010 - 7:09 PM

    I wouldn't ruffle any feathers,just leave it alone !!Grin Damian

    NickParry
    NickParry  81016 forum posts Wales79 Constructive Critique Points
    11 Apr 2010 - 7:16 PM

    It works well IMHO.

    Nick Smile

    csurry
    csurry  129230 forum posts92 Constructive Critique Points
    11 Apr 2010 - 7:25 PM

    Downloaded the darker of the two and did a simple granient map of black to white and it really perks up the contrast, but of course that depends if that is the look that you want.

    JamesGarfield
    11 Apr 2010 - 7:28 PM

    I like version two a little more than version one but in all honestly i'd be happy with either as it's a great shot and they both work.

    User_Removed
    11 Apr 2010 - 8:24 PM

    In CS4...

    +0.14 Exposure and 0.80 Gamma Correction makes an impressive difference on the darker version (for me Smile

    FWIW

    Last Modified By User_Removed at 11 Apr 2010 - 8:25 PM
    TheWanderer
    12 Apr 2010 - 12:15 PM

    Many thanks for your feedback and Ideas. I have added it again to the gallery with some of the tips In place.
    Image

    miptog
    miptog  83532 forum posts United Kingdom61 Constructive Critique Points
    12 Apr 2010 - 4:13 PM

    Jon

    Its a shame that you haven't allowed a mods, as some useful tips could be learnt from other people post work.

    Michael

    TheWanderer
    12 Apr 2010 - 5:47 PM

    I have forgot to do that yet again. Sad

    TheWanderer
    15 Apr 2010 - 7:44 PM

    OK my final edit and this time i have added the MOD tab.
    Final Image

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