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Critique Anyone got a spare 2mins??


neil75 e2
5 25 United Kingdom
1 Jun 2011 8:29AM
Hi All, just wondering if anyone had spare couple of minutes to check out a Photo I added on to the Critique Gallery on Monday. As yet Ive had no feedback and as it is a first attempt at portrait I would appreciate any help, thoughts and comments. Im not easily offended so if it rubbish please say so.

Thanks

Neil

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cats_123 e2
10 4.3k 25 Northern Ireland
1 Jun 2011 8:40AM
am no expert.....but have uploaded a mod Smile
User_Removed 5 4.6k 1 Scotland
1 Jun 2011 9:42AM
Agree with Darren.

Camera angle too high and no eye contact. Try to imagine a plane running between forehead and chin, then use a camera angle perpendicular to that plane, level to the centre of the plane. Simply ask the subject to look at the centre of the lens.

Very good first attempt though.
filmforever 7 695
1 Jun 2011 10:15AM
Nice soft lighting which suits the subject. Agree with the comments re. angle and eyeline. If the eyes were looking more up towards camera, the the slightly high angle wouldn't matter so much.
neil75 e2
5 25 United Kingdom
1 Jun 2011 9:17PM
Just like to say thanks to everyone for your comments and Mods. All greatly appreciated.

Thanks
Neil

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