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DOGSBODY
DOGSBODY  51432 forum posts England30 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:18 AM

Do you remember the old game of consequences where someone would start a story and then pass it to someone else to add a bit more and so on down the line? Well, I thought that it may be fun to do something similar here.

You may write up to a maximum of 15 words and who knows where the plot will lead it may even be worth publishing and become a best seller.

I'll start it off.

"The full moon illuminated the wet cobbled streets in an eerie glow....

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SuziBlue
SuziBlue  1116195 forum posts Scotland10 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:32 AM

... as Aloysius crossed the road and stared longingly into the shop window. If only he ...

(great idea!)

riprap007
riprap007  101568 forum posts England37 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:36 AM

could reach through the glass and hold the Fender Stratocaster in his hands, he would...

jonah794
jonah794  51723 forum posts United Kingdom11 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:40 AM

show the world how brilliant he was and become more famous! but what if...

(fantastic idea!)

Henchard
Henchard  92744 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:42 AM

No one finished the previous one.....

Last Modified By Henchard at 13 Feb 2010 - 9:44 AM
jonah794
jonah794  51723 forum posts United Kingdom11 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:49 AM

because it got nowhere... just like the man walking near the...

Last Modified By jonah794 at 13 Feb 2010 - 9:49 AM
Henchard
Henchard  92744 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:50 AM

ePZ offices who said 'moderators duplicate thread'....

Last Modified By Henchard at 13 Feb 2010 - 9:50 AM
lobsterboy
lobsterboy Site Moderator 1014137 forum postslobsterboy vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:52 AM

but the moderators are feeling laid back and lax...

Henchard
Henchard  92744 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:53 AM

and thus operating double standards...

jonah794
jonah794  51723 forum posts United Kingdom11 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 9:55 AM

its fun to start a new one, otherwise it is the 'same old thing'...

Henchard
Henchard  92744 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 10:00 AM

'but the inequitable enforcement of rules leads to disquiet', said the boring old pedant.......


(Jonah I'm not sure you continued correctly)

Last Modified By Henchard at 13 Feb 2010 - 10:01 AM
jonah794
jonah794  51723 forum posts United Kingdom11 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 10:12 AM

well it is very unambiguous that a new story builder was needed...

lobsterboy
lobsterboy Site Moderator 1014137 forum postslobsterboy vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 10:14 AM

"Chillax, the rules are printed in paperback...it means they are flexible" said the hansom moderator. (going over 15 words as if to emphasise the point).

riprap007
riprap007  101568 forum posts England37 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2010 - 10:32 AM

I think I am hearing voices, said the man in love with the Fender, strange!

collywobles
13 Feb 2010 - 11:39 AM

The Bells The Bells said quazimodo

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