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Some critiique please


Snapper_T e2
10 848 United Kingdom
3 Feb 2006 4:09AM
Any chance of some critique on this shot . Not bothered about clicks/hearts.

Is it too dark on the models right? Blue lighting too distracting? etc..

Ta

Trev

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spaceman e2
10 5.2k 3 Wales
3 Feb 2006 4:21AM
I agree with what you've said - plus I think her hair needs more light to seperate it from the BG. She also looks a bit tense.
spaceman e2
10 5.2k 3 Wales
3 Feb 2006 4:23AM
.....and maybe crop a little from the bottom.
spaceman e2
10 5.2k 3 Wales
3 Feb 2006 4:24AM
.....and soften the light.
Snapper_T e2
10 848 United Kingdom
3 Feb 2006 10:10AM
Cheers Michael. Need to work on portraiture this year, so picking up advice along the way.
Trev
Hoffy e2
10 257 16 England
5 Feb 2006 11:41PM
Hi Trev.

The highlight in the back light is burning out the face light, hence the dark face. The blue filter to the back would work well, but try and make it less harsh and a sutle lighting to the face will help.

If you have a flah meter, check the background light first and then check the face light, then both together. You will then need to balance the two settings.

If you are using only to lights I would place a gentle reflector to the left to allow a touch more light that side.

Cheers

paul
Snapper_T e2
10 848 United Kingdom
6 Feb 2006 3:50AM
Thanks for the input Paul. Some things to think about there.
Trev

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