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    Snapper_T
    Snapper_T e2 Member 10848 forum postsSnapper_T vcard United Kingdom
    3 Feb 2006 - 4:09 AM

    Any chance of some critique on this shot. Not bothered about clicks/hearts.

    Is it too dark on the models right? Blue lighting too distracting? etc..

    Ta

    Trev

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    spaceman
    spaceman  105166 forum posts Wales3 Constructive Critique Points
    3 Feb 2006 - 4:21 AM

    I agree with what you've said - plus I think her hair needs more light to seperate it from the BG. She also looks a bit tense.

    spaceman
    spaceman  105166 forum posts Wales3 Constructive Critique Points
    3 Feb 2006 - 4:23 AM

    .....and maybe crop a little from the bottom.

    spaceman
    spaceman  105166 forum posts Wales3 Constructive Critique Points
    3 Feb 2006 - 4:24 AM

    .....and soften the light.

    Snapper_T
    Snapper_T e2 Member 10848 forum postsSnapper_T vcard United Kingdom
    3 Feb 2006 - 10:10 AM

    Cheers Michael. Need to work on portraiture this year, so picking up advice along the way.
    Trev

    Hoffy
    Hoffy  9212 forum posts England16 Constructive Critique Points
    5 Feb 2006 - 11:41 PM

    Hi Trev.

    The highlight in the back light is burning out the face light, hence the dark face. The blue filter to the back would work well, but try and make it less harsh and a sutle lighting to the face will help.

    If you have a flah meter, check the background light first and then check the face light, then both together. You will then need to balance the two settings.

    If you are using only to lights I would place a gentle reflector to the left to allow a touch more light that side.

    Cheers

    paul

    Snapper_T
    Snapper_T e2 Member 10848 forum postsSnapper_T vcard United Kingdom
    6 Feb 2006 - 3:50 AM

    Thanks for the input Paul. Some things to think about there.
    Trev

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