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More digital manipulations done to original photo. I agree that the original had better compositions. But I like the color in the second one for some reason. In the original I shot in a different white balance and in the other I shot with the correct white balance. You folks have taught me some digital manipulation tricks and I thank you.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:Sigma 70-300mm Macro
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:2 Mar 2013 - 10:23 PM
Focal Length:300mm
Aperture:f/32.0
Shutter Speed:1sec
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Drops Of Music Revised series
Username:sweetart79 sweetart79
Uploaded:6 Mar 2013 - 4:01 AM

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Andysnapper
Andysnapper e2 Member 6101 forum postsAndysnapper vcard England18 Constructive Critique Points
5 Mar 2013 - 6:39 AM

Superb, I really love this, it's imaginitive and technically excellent.

Andy

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ErictheViking
ErictheViking e2 Member 1124 forum postsErictheViking vcard Scotland102 Constructive Critique Points
5 Mar 2013 - 8:45 AM

I like this the best it has the good qualities discussed in the first and second versions and I find the random colour makes me look around the image rather than just at the image. Grin

Well done Michelle the technique you are using works and all I can suggest from here is to use that technique with other themes as your inspiration decides.

Eric Grin

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom854 Constructive Critique Points
5 Mar 2013 - 9:19 AM

That's better. The original idea is good, but this now lifts the idea to a creative level. The work was well worth it. Now try one even closer with fewer drops.

Paul

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pamelajean Critique Team 8770 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1599 Constructive Critique Points
5 Mar 2013 - 5:36 PM

Wow, brilliant, Michelle. That's my favourite version of the two images, and I really like the way you haven't gone as overboard as I did with the colouring of the balls/drops. Eric is right, the eye moves around and in and out of the dimensions, and the random placing of the colours helps create a more interesting journey for the viewer's eye. Well done!
Pamela.

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sweetart79
5 Mar 2013 - 9:18 PM

and all of you were awesome in assisting me. thanks for the critique and editing suggestions.

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