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Title:Birds on sticks ?
Username:Paul Morgan Paul Morgan
Uploaded:11 Feb 2012 - 7:17 PM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
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atworner
atworner (e2 Member)
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165 forum postsatworner vcard Norway33 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2012 - 8:19 PM
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Wah, poor birdie Sad Still mycat does this too and I try to look the other way...........

+like the idea of the shot
+like the offset composition
+some spectral highlights in there work for me

-Kitty's face is overexposed,
-the bird looks like it's been dead for a while (eye is sunken) so I'm not convinced this just happened, and that seems important to me - the spontaneity thing.
-would have liked a simpler frame around it - it sort of overwhelms the image.

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janeez
janeez (e2 Member)
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680 forum postsjaneez vcard United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2012 - 8:52 PM
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Like the composition with cats eye in top left
Nice detail in birds feathers
Like the bokeh effect with the cat, gives it a more sinister feel!

Birds tail is cropped out
writing on the frame bottom right
line going through bird and cat is a distraction

Don't mind the over exposure of the cat and is the birds eye closed? It looks like it to me.

Paul Morgan
Paul Morgan (Challenge Team)
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8608 forum postsPaul Morgan vcard England5 Constructive Critique Points
12 Feb 2012 - 12:55 AM
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Cheers thanks.

Was defiantly a fresh kill, that leg was still twitching Smile

And yes the eye was closed.

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