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A beggar and his dog enjoying the sun.

Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-LX5
Lens:LEICA
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Homeless?
Username:f8 f8
Uploaded:13 Mar 2012 - 12:39 AM

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AnneWorner
AnneWorner e2 Member 7614 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States43 Constructive Critique Points
13 Mar 2012 - 5:13 PM

+street
+interesting with the backgroun
+monochromatic suits street


-perspective distortions - some rotation and horizontal work would help (-0.2 rotate, and +13 horizontal - in that ball park)
-loss of detail in the dark areas
-composition - I'd crop to the post on the right and then down to "join in" on the top, simplifying the shot. Then maybe a small -15 vignette to pull the image together.

Anne

Last Modified By AnneWorner at 13 Mar 2012 - 5:13 PM

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