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Leafy Abstract

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Autumn leaves form the basis of this attempt at digital art.

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ20
Lens:Leica Fixed Zoom
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:13 Nov 2011 - 9:34 AM
Focal Length:13.3mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/80sec
Exposure Comp:-0.33
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Leafy Abstract
Username:fentiger fentiger
Uploaded:12 Mar 2012 - 7:32 AM

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AnneWorner
AnneWorner e2 Member 6613 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States42 Constructive Critique Points
12 Mar 2012 - 5:27 PM

+You have really created an interesting effect here - I would call this the "gummy bear preset" Smile
+Autumnal colours
+Abstract quality

-Maybe overdone a bit - it's fun playing around with this though.
-Maybe a square crop
-Brighten a bit/with a light vignette to pull it together

Last Modified By AnneWorner at 12 Mar 2012 - 5:28 PM

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WeeGeordieLass
WeeGeordieLass e2 Member 2341 forum postsWeeGeordieLass vcard England
12 Mar 2012 - 6:21 PM

+ different take on the normal "autumn leaves" shot
+ nice blend of colours
+ interesting shapes

- I find my eyes wandering around the shot and not settling on anything, and wonder if a point of interest would be an improvement.
- Not too sure I like the texture
- I think I would have liked more sharpness around the edges of the image

Unusual shot, which I like, especially the colours and shapes which make me look, and then look again.

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fentiger
fentiger e2 Member 13915 forum postsfentiger vcard England22 Constructive Critique Points
12 Mar 2012 - 7:26 PM

How we all differ ~ a light vignette v more sharpness around the edges. I did actually give it a vignette and will try a bit more and I agree it needs brightening with perhaps a tad more colour saturation.

I have an idea for "a point of interest" which would turn it into a significantly different image. More, as Anne puts it, "playing around"

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