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Taken at the Five Sisters Zoo near Edinburgh.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 30D
Lens:Sigma 17-50mm f/2.8 EX DC OS HSM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 Nov 2011 - 1:08 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Looking Out
Username:Umberto_Vanni Umberto_Vanni
Uploaded:12 Feb 2012 - 1:50 PM

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Paintman
Paintman e2 Member 7831 forum postsPaintman vcard United Kingdom172 Constructive Critique Points
12 Feb 2012 - 8:16 PM

+ I like the ears pointing at the same angle.
+ I like the donkey's expression.
+ I like the light which shows up the textures of the donkey's coat.

- I don't like the way the second donkey is hidden behind the first one. Its feet appear out of the first's stomach and the face of the donkey is obscured too much. Taking the shot from the other side would be better compositionally imo.
- I don't like the flat contrast. It needs selective contrast applied and a definite white and black.
-I don't like the blurred bit at the bottom edge of the photo.

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade  1014728 forum posts England216 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2012 - 12:47 PM

mirroring of the donkeys
both have alert ears
space to right for them to look into

not keen on the crop on the donkeys - get the whole thing in shot, or just the important head parts...
fence position - it's going through the poor thing's head...
strange blurring around the donkey's knees, like you've cloned something and left evidence

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Umberto_Vanni
Umberto_Vanni e2 Member 9348 forum postsUmberto_Vanni vcard Scotland
14 Feb 2012 - 2:11 PM

You are correct. I did clone out a post that was there. Didn't make a great job of it Smile Didn't spot the stray bit of fence. In hindsight a closer shot would have been better. Would have solved the problem of the post and the feet.

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