Talybont Falls

atworner (e2 Member)

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11 Feb 2012 - 8:13 PM

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I don't do very many landscapes - I should try to do some just to understand what makes them work. So this is my 2cents worth, and that might be all it's worth!

+colours of the leaves/vegetation are pleasing
+water movement
+detail

-composition - the waterfall is way too far to the left in the image.
-water is blue toned
-shadow areas are too dark

Ade_Osman (e2 Member)

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11 Feb 2012 - 10:11 PM

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Well that's constructive Chris, but of course you'd really know wouldn't you....

ade_mcfade (Critique Team)

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11 Feb 2012 - 11:32 PM

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didn't realise you could comment if you were not a member of the group..... chris isn't in the group....

Ade_Osman (e2 Member)

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12 Feb 2012 - 12:56 AM

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As I thought then guys, one for the trash.....Thanks for your honesty!

Ade

Chris_L

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12 Feb 2012 - 11:03 PM

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Quote: didn't realise you could comment if you were not a member of the group..... chris isn't in the group....

Heeeeeeee

It is crap though Ade and I thought I'd just cut through the usual compliment sandwich. One for the trash son.

chensuriashi (e2 Member)

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18 Mar 2012 - 3:29 PM

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I saw this one and was surprised, as your bird shots on your PF are so very good but here you could have got a good shot if you had thought about it more.

- Is shot upright and should have been shot flat
+ There is a nice close crop in there from the bottom left of the tree
- Need a few curves to show the tones in the rocks
+ The greens are varied and not over saturated at all
- I am not a lover of milky water with slow exp...Just me I know most togs love it...
+ There is another crop in there too in the middle, without the waterfall, with the shade and the tree and that little rock mid right...will do them now...Thanks Chen.