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i took this to night when the Christmas lights went on i took a lot some were rubbish and some might be ok value your words of wisdom

billy

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:16.0-85.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:30 Nov 2012 - 8:25 PM
Focal Length:16mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:2.2sec
Exposure Comp:0.000000
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:Fluorescent
Title:no words needed
Username:williamsloan williamsloan
Uploaded:30 Nov 2012 - 10:30 PM
Tags:Flash / lighting, General
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nonur
nonur e2 Member 6nonur vcard Turkey8 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2012 - 11:46 PM

Both are excellent night shots, Billy. I like them a lot.SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 431 forum postsIrishkate vcard United Kingdom76 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2012 - 1:40 AM

Two great images Billy.
I'd be hard pushed to capture anything like this.
It looks an amazing building and your images give some indication of size.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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jdinne
jdinne  11 England
1 Dec 2012 - 8:08 AM

Both excellent Billy, slight preference for V2. Well done.

John

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NDODS e2 Member 43678 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom107 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2012 - 9:01 AM

Two stunningly well composed and captured photographs, each wonderfully exposed Billy

regards Nathan

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canonfan
canonfan e2 Member 4canonfan vcard United Kingdom
1 Dec 2012 - 1:15 PM

Two excellent night images Billy. Very well captured
Jim

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banehawi Critique Team 10986 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2012 - 3:18 PM

Both good shots Billy. V1 is a good depiction of the Titanice lights. V2 can have the highlights toned down, and be straightened a little so that bright centre part is vertical.

Ive loaded a mod of V2.

Strange to think of the concept of Christmas Lights on a memorial to the dead.


Regards


Willie

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pamelajean Critique Team 8829 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2012 - 5:46 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

An interesting building, Billy, and the patterns on the facade look great when lit up. I love that "butterfly" shape, and I think you did really well.
V1, for me, is more about the word "Titanic", the patterns and blue lights within it, with a part of the building included, to show where it is. It's obviously a lot more abstract than V2, but nicely depicted.
In my modification, I cropped some off both sides. I cropped the left in particular in order to remove the little bit of background showing there, making it even more abstract. I also added canvas to the bottom, as I felt the word was close to the bottom frame edge, also that the inclusion of more of the word's reflections would add a further dimension to its abstractness.
In my second modification, I again added canvas to the bottom, selected the bright centre column and toned it down a bit, then added canvas to the left side and removed the sign and lights there. I also removed the flares in the sky from the bottom right side.
Pamela.

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paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2012 - 9:00 PM

Both very good. A bit of work on v2 as Willie says, but v1 one has great strength. Good stuff.

Paul

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Chinga e2 Member 4Chinga vcard United Kingdom
2 Dec 2012 - 1:39 AM

AMAZING! No words needed for sure! Love V1... IB

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