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Thanks so much for all the comments on yesterday's effort.

This is another attempt at the same photo, taking into account everyone's great advice from yesterday's.

Subjects closer together, a darker but still brown background, opaque watermark, tighter crop.

More advice for more improvements will always be welcome, so all comments gratefully received!

Thanks,
Lianna

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:EF24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:7 Feb 2012 - 12:24 PM
Focal Length:70mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/8sec
Exposure Comp:-1.0
ISO:320
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:On, Fired
Title:~~~
Username:lillypix lillypix
Uploaded:7 Feb 2012 - 11:31 AM
Tags:Garlic, General
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Votes:40

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franken
franken (e2 Member)
10
2393 forum postsfranken vcard Wales2 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2012 - 11:36 AM
0

Lovely still -life.

Ken

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That's better!

Sorry Lianna, I followed yesterday's version but as I know precious little about this kind of shots, I read all and said nothing!

nmilyaev
7 Feb 2012 - 11:50 AM
0

Beautifully executed!

great capture fine detail and natural colours lighting spot on

Graham

luceombra
7 Feb 2012 - 2:12 PM
0

This is marvelous. I see that you have accepted my suggestion concerning the opacity of the signature Wink Now is much better Smile
Al

Briwooly
Briwooly (e2 Member)
7
450 forum postsBriwooly vcard England5 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2012 - 2:24 PM
0

Real nice work Lianna great still life

Brian..........................

Niknut
Niknut (e2 Member)
3
249 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom51 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2012 - 5:10 PM
0

Beautiful shot !!!.....much more 'feeling' gone into this shot, with a lovely 'aura' !!, & quite an
improvement over the previous version.......top notch stuff !!!!!!!!

lillypix
8 Feb 2012 - 7:29 AM
0

Wow! I hadn't expected such attention for this! Thanks for all the positive comments and votes. It's my first RC photo Smile

It's proven the power of the critique gallery - so helpful!

Thanks,
Lianna

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