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Thanks so much for all the comments on yesterday's effort.

This is another attempt at the same photo, taking into account everyone's great advice from yesterday's.

Subjects closer together, a darker but still brown background, opaque watermark, tighter crop.

More advice for more improvements will always be welcome, so all comments gratefully received!

Thanks,
Lianna

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:EF24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:7 Feb 2012 - 12:24 PM
Focal Length:70mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/8sec
Exposure Comp:-1.0
ISO:320
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:On, Fired
Title:~~~
Username:lillypix lillypix
Uploaded:7 Feb 2012 - 11:31 AM
Tags:Garlic, General
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franken
franken e2 Member 123270 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2012 - 11:36 AM

Lovely still -life.

Ken

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Jestertheclown
7 Feb 2012 - 11:45 AM

That's better!

Sorry Lianna, I followed yesterday's version but as I know precious little about this kind of shots, I read all and said nothing!

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nmilyaev
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7 Feb 2012 - 11:50 AM

Beautifully executed!

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digital_boi
7 Feb 2012 - 12:52 PM

great capture fine detail and natural colours lighting spot on

Graham

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luceombra
luceombra  327 forum posts Italy5 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2012 - 2:12 PM

This is marvelous. I see that you have accepted my suggestion concerning the opacity of the signature Wink Now is much better Smile
Al

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Briwooly
Briwooly  9452 forum posts England5 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2012 - 2:24 PM

Real nice work Lianna great still life

Brian..........................

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Niknut
Niknut e2 Member 4740 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom64 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2012 - 5:10 PM

Beautiful shot !!!.....much more 'feeling' gone into this shot, with a lovely 'aura' !!, & quite an
improvement over the previous version.......top notch stuff !!!!!!!!

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lillypix
lillypix  460 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2012 - 7:29 AM

Wow! I hadn't expected such attention for this! Thanks for all the positive comments and votes. It's my first RC photo Smile

It's proven the power of the critique gallery - so helpful!

Thanks,
Lianna

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