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Covering my First Professional wedding. This is the final photograph Craig and Eilidh chose to have displayed in their living room

Camera:Nikon D3 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:70-200mm f2.8 VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:A Kiss is a Kiss
Username:vibes2003 vibes2003
Uploaded:30 Nov 2009 - 4:10 PM
Tags:Black & white, Fashion, Portraits / people, Wedding / social
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andy210966
30 Nov 2009 - 4:18 PM

Great location choice! A really pretty shot in which the reflection brings a lot to the image! They must have been very pleased with this one!

Andy

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Lovely capture indeed & works well in mono

Chris

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colmar  742 forum posts Scotland35 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2009 - 5:07 PM

Excellent image and am sure treasured by the happy couple thanks for sharing Colin

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Coast Critique Team 61229 forum postsCoast vcard United Kingdom292 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2009 - 7:50 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is a creative wedding portrait and I can see why the couple have chosen this for their living room wall. Personal thing with the veil wrapped back over the tree. I like the reflection it makes with the couple but it feels a little un-natural with what otherwise is a very natural looking portrait.

I also think the grooms hand on the neck of his bride is a little dominating being flat to the camera and cupped more round to the back of the neck or turned to more of an edge to the camera may be better.

My final point would be around the brides dress which is a little burnt out and could do with a little toning down.

That said this is none the less a fine wedding portrait. Creatively seen and put together.

Paul

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