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A moment's reflection

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This is a photo of Elena taken at the Monasterio de Piedra, near Catalayud in the the Zaragoza province of Spain.

It's been converted to grayscale and had some toning applied in Lightroom.

Comments very welcome.

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:Sigma 17-70mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:A moment's reflection
Username:mpan66 mpan66
Uploaded:25 Sep 2008 - 5:52 PM
Tags:Black & white, Elena, Portrait, Portraits / people, Thoughtful, Woman
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BillS
BillS  827 forum posts United Kingdom
25 Sep 2008 - 6:36 PM

Not sure that I like the tone , but an excellent portrait .

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mpan66
mpan66 e2 Member 7mpan66 vcard United Kingdom
25 Sep 2008 - 6:53 PM

Thanks for taking the time to comment. I think you might be right - I'll try a different tone and re-post sometime soon.

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Geraint
Geraint  7715 forum posts Wales34 Constructive Critique Points
25 Sep 2008 - 9:27 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like this. I agree with the comment above about the toning. I just think it's too saturated - maybe keep the blue but toned down a bit (pardon the pun). It might be an idea to crop a little off the top and right so that the model isn't so centrally-composed. It would then give her space to 'look into' on the left.
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