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This is Anna and from my first shoot with her yesterday. We didn't know it until we worked together but her family and my family are from the same small Staffordshire village !

Shot on the Staffordshire/Derbyshire border, natural light with a bit of fill.

Brand:SAMSUNG TECHWIN Co.
Camera:Samsung GX10 Check out Samsung NX Generation!
Lens:smc PENTAX-FA 28-105mm F4-5.6 [IF]
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:11 Jul 2012 - 11:05 AM
Focal Length:105mm
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:160
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:On, Fired
Title:A sexy lady
Username:steveplant steveplant
Uploaded:12 Jul 2012 - 4:18 PM
Tags:Beauty, Expression, Eyes, Hair, Lips, Portraits / people, Teeth
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gsxr400
gsxr400 e2 Member 8gsxr400 vcard
12 Jul 2012 - 4:32 PM

Nice image, but a few imperfections need to be removed in my opinion.

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steveplant
steveplant e2 Member 1256 forum postssteveplant vcard 2 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jul 2012 - 4:36 PM

Thanks for the comment Andrew, I look into her eyes and lose th eplot Smile

Steve Smile

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pablophotographer
pablophotographer e2 Member 3496 forum postspablophotographer vcard 188 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jul 2012 - 9:44 PM

Hello Steve,

I stopped at your pic because she looks like an actress I know of. She is not who I thought she may be, but since I am here, it feels right to share a comment with you.
I don't mind the fill in flash, not all days are bright Sad but there is one thing I should ask you to consider before you shoot her. Colour. I can see what you mean about her green eyes which are pleasingly echoed in the nature around her (on the construction which she leans on). I also like how green blends with the brown top she wears and how this colour is shifting vividness by its presence on her scalp. gets darker again on right side as we look and joins her eyebrows ending in her eyes. Nothing matches her PINK lipstick. Although I am not wearing any, I think the colour she has chosen ruins the colour amalgamation. Something more muted maybe? Thankfully manipulation tools exist and you can correct it, play around until you find something suitable.

A minor concern is the hair that is about to get in her mouth, I would had asked her to pull it back, left side as we look looks falling better.

That's me done, up to you now.

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12 Jul 2012 - 10:38 PM

Hello Pablo,

Thank you for th elong and considered comment Smile I like the lipstick myself and her fingernails are pink, (unvarnished). As for the hair across her cheek, it was a spontaneous shot, stopping to move the hair would possibly have lost the spontaneity. I could photoshop it at a later date of course.

Steve Smile

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13 Jul 2012 - 4:36 PM

hey Steve,

I had not noticed her nails were pink, they look so natural...

I suspected about the hair being part of "unprepared" look; the hair on the left is also mildly wild.

It's your pic, you are in charge Smile

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13 Jul 2012 - 10:08 PM

Thanks Pablo Smile

Steve Smile

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