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Another from a sunset that turned stormy.

Camera:Sony A550
Lens:Sigma 17-70mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:A Storm Brewing
Username:DarylH DarylH
Uploaded:26 Jul 2010 - 4:15 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Night / low light
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simonjr
simonjr  8 Wales
26 Jul 2010 - 4:52 PM

Great shot love the clouds and the reflection on the sand.
Simon

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samlw68
samlw68  4 United Kingdom
26 Jul 2010 - 5:01 PM

great shot

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10901 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2898 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2010 - 5:17 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A nice scene Daryl. Storms can provide terrific clouds and skies, and that luminous light is very nice.

As there is so much of interest in the sky, the shot can look better if theres less foreground and more sky. Theres not a lot going on at the bottom beyond that light, and if cropped here it provides a lead in to the scene.

Ive cropped in the mod, and closed in a little more sky just to place the horizon on a third. Increased contrast and applied a warming filter to add to the drama.


Nice work,


Hope this is helpful,


Regards


Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom860 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2010 - 8:52 PM

Like this, but the mod is even better, but without the contrast increase. Clouds have gone too dark. Do the crop, keeping the tones as they are.

Paul

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Jestertheclown
26 Jul 2010 - 9:33 PM

I rather think you're both right so I've attempted the middle road!

Please see my mod.

Jester.

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8799 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1613 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jul 2010 - 4:52 PM

Dare I say I like it just as it is? In fact, I think it's the best image in your portfolio so far.
Pamela.

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