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Hello thank you for looking at my photo a study in Yellow

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Reagrds

Steven

Brand:SONY DSC-N2 old digital point and shoot
Camera:Sony A200
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:20 Dec 2011 - 2:14 AM
Focal Length:20.6mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:160
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:A study in Yellow
Username:StevenBest StevenBest
Uploaded:6 Jan 2012 - 4:15 AM
Tags:Architecture, General, Specialist / abstract, Yellow
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prabhusinha
prabhusinha e2 Member 6prabhusinha vcard India3 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 4:39 AM

A Great angle of view.

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samarmishra
6 Jan 2012 - 5:56 AM

Well taken, great shot..

Samar.

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nonur
nonur e2 Member 5nonur vcard Turkey8 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 6:40 AM

Lovely study, well done!

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Chinga
Chinga e2 Member 3Chinga vcard United Kingdom
6 Jan 2012 - 6:59 AM

This makes a beautiful abstract! Good work! IB

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saltireblue
saltireblue Site Moderator 43570 forum postssaltireblue vcard Norway23 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 7:21 AM

MArvellous pov on this abstract. Like it lots.

Malc

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StevenBest
StevenBest e2 Member 4StevenBest vcard United Kingdom
6 Jan 2012 - 7:39 AM

Dear Team.

I really thank you all for the comments about my photo I really do value your feedback as I want to learn. Thank you as well for looking at my folio

again just wanted to thank you

Regards

Steven

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alansnap
alansnap e2 Member 10528 forum postsalansnap vcard United Kingdom22 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 8:23 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

HI Steven, I really like architectural shots like this which challenge the viewer. I'd like to see another version where you've stepped to the left a little or you crop the right, because at the moment the strong curved vertical cuts the image in two so the top right is somewhat disconnected. Another angle might not work, but I think it's worth the try.
Alan

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Niknut
Niknut e2 Member 4493 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom60 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 4:32 PM

Fascinating shot !!!....love those repeating curves....top notch stuff !!

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 8:00 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Very nice indeed. I might consider cropping off the highlights at the bottom - by far the brightest parts of the image and right on the edge.

paul

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StevenBest e2 Member 4StevenBest vcard United Kingdom
7 Jan 2012 - 1:20 AM

Hello I have just uploaded a different version of the photo and taking in some comments made see what you think also the photos were taken on a very old digital camera.

Regards

Steven

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2012 - 8:54 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

For me, that small crop is a great improvement to an already good image. It is the curves that make this and was extremely well spotted, and simple is often best.

It is usually not a good idea to have highlights, particularly the only highlights, on the edge of the frame. This shows that fact.

Paul

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Niknut
Niknut e2 Member 4493 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom60 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2012 - 3:17 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I'll stick with V1 !!............

V2 has become a pure 'pattern' picture, still OK with nice curves & colour, but it's lost the 'zing' that exists in V1 ?????

Different strokes for different blokes, I think the expression is ??

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taggart
taggart e2 Member 942 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2012 - 10:06 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I so wanted this to be a a hosta-- The cropping has made it pure abstract!

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Chinga
Chinga e2 Member 3Chinga vcard United Kingdom
9 Jan 2012 - 5:46 AM

It looks good from here.
But V1 was an amazing image anyway!
Good work. IB

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