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Taken a few weeks ago on the beach at Old Hunstanton in Norfolk.

No. 2 takes account of the comments made by redstag and cassiecat

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Camera:Canon Eos 40D
Lens:Canon 28-135 mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:A Walk on the Beach
Username:fentiger fentiger
Uploaded:20 Jun 2010 - 7:34 AM
Tags:Beach, Dunes, Landscape / travel, Norfolk, Old hunstanton, People, Photo journalism, Portraits / people, Sand, Sea
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redstag
redstag e2 Member 8100 forum postsredstag vcard United Kingdom14 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 7:43 AM

My only comment is that perhaps the marram grass is a bit dominant in the foreground. A tighter crop would sort that out for me. Otherwise I like all the elements in this.
Jon

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CarolG
CarolG e2 Member 7128 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece16 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 7:49 AM

A lovely composition, Albert, well captured. Carol

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Ray42
Ray42  6 England3 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 7:53 AM

A lovely comp - I agree with cropping a tad off the bottom - makes a lovely scene - nice one

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cassiecat
cassiecat  639 forum posts England46 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 8:03 AM

agree about the crop, and would have been good to catch the walkers in the gap between the grasses.lesley

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imagio
imagio  7 England1 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 8:22 AM

Nice one Albert

Bernie

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nickyv32
nickyv32 e2 Member 7135 forum postsnickyv32 vcard England
20 Jun 2010 - 8:43 AM

Lovely sand, something we miss in this area, I like the tufty grass, makes it for me, great shot, haven't seen a busy beach yet this year

Nicky xxx

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MickyMc
MickyMc  6 United Kingdom
20 Jun 2010 - 9:25 AM

Makes me want to get to the coast quickly
Mavis

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Mynett
Mynett e2 Member 6137 forum postsMynett vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 9:42 AM

v2 is lovely .... the inclusion of the couple shows off the scale and that sand looks so inviting

Linda

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AnneWorner
AnneWorner e2 Member 6602 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States41 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 11:10 AM

A lovely scene Albert. I much prefer v1 - for some reason to me it is more pleasing to the eye. I think the central placement of the figures in v2 makes it lose its impact.
Anne

(I don't think you can get much closer to the thirds "rule" than you have here.

Last Modified By AnneWorner at 20 Jun 2010 - 11:17 AM

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taggart
taggart e2 Member 942 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 1:09 PM

The crop works well-- like this one!
JEnnnnn

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Daisymaye
Daisymaye e2 Member 5Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 2:39 PM

Both lovely images Albert. ..........Sandy

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DOGSBODY
DOGSBODY  51432 forum posts England30 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2010 - 7:13 PM


Quote: would have been good to catch the walkers in the gap between the grasses.lesley

I agree V.2 would be my choice if the grass did not partly obscure the walkers. Have you cloned it out in v.1 or is it a slightly different viewpoint.

I haven't spent much time on site for the last week too much footie on TV. I'm off now to watch Brazil. Andy

Last Modified By DOGSBODY at 20 Jun 2010 - 7:17 PM

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mikbee
mikbee e2 Member 7mikbee vcard Scotland7 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2010 - 1:06 AM

Like the rugged look of the grass Albert.
Nice colours too.
Good shots.
Mick.

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photophantom
21 Jun 2010 - 5:22 AM

both works well Albert, great shot
Dennis

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fentiger
fentiger e2 Member 13915 forum postsfentiger vcard England22 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2010 - 9:14 AM

Many thanks to everybody who have looked, voted and commented.

Albert

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danbrann
danbrann e2 Member 9470 forum postsdanbrann vcard 15 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2010 - 2:39 PM

A pleasant image Albert and all the elements working together..well almost.

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dawnmichelle
dawnmichelle e2 Member 7dawnmichelle vcard United States
21 Jun 2010 - 2:58 PM

both work for me..

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Suehh
Suehh e2 Member 739 forum postsSuehh vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2010 - 4:06 PM

A very lovely scene Albert.

Sue

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