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A bell, hanging from a wooden door...
Should i keep the wooden part parallel???
I tried that, bt its nt working...

Brand:Samsung
Camera:Samsung ES30
Lens:4.9-24.5mm 1:3.5-5.9 27mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:25 Aug 2012 - 9:29 PM
Focal Length:4.9mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/45sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Fired
White Balance:Auto
Title:Abandoned...
Username:b_chat b_chat
Uploaded:24 Sep 2012 - 1:58 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Specialist / abstract
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I think this is a fab shot and would personally keep the bar as isSmile x

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banehawi
banehawi (Critique Team)
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522 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2130 Constructive Critique Points
24 Sep 2012 - 2:42 PM
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Leave the wooden part, as the Bell is vertical, - you would change that if the wooden post was changed. But, if you can manage it, move the bell further back to the left third as in the mod.

Select the bell with the lasso tool, copy it and paste it, then re size the copy using the transform tool, making it a little smaller, and with the move tool re position it. Use a mas on the newly created layer to clean up any bits you copied over that dont fit. The clone over the original bell, - easy since its mostly painting with black.




regards



Willie

Sooty_1
Sooty_1 (Critique Team)
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962 forum posts United Kingdom161 Constructive Critique Points
24 Sep 2012 - 4:03 PM
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I prefer the original, I would just add a little space to the bottom. Otherwise, the construction and lighting is pretty good.

Nick

paulbroad
24 Sep 2012 - 6:15 PM
0

I would leave the composition alone, but would give the edges of the bell a stroke with the dodge tool to increase detail.

Paul

There's a portrait option in there.

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