adam & eva

pamelajean (Critique Team)

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8 Mar 2011 - 5:38 PM

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Hello, Romas. This is a lovely old building and wall, but I feel there is far too much dead space on the right and a lot of blue in the image. Your light falls on the right-hand wall, leaving the building in shadow. I feel that a different angle on the pub, one that gave it more prominence, would be preferable. I have tried a modification where I cropped the right side, adjusted highlights and shadows to balance the light, adjusted levels, cloned out the intrusions at the top and used Colour Balance in an attempt to remove some of the blue.
Pamela.