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This isn't completed yet, But I just wanted some feedback as I don't have anyone to bounce ideas off at the moment.
This is Adam for his period classical album 'Songs without words.'

Any help of feedback would be much appreciated!

Thanks

Bridge

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Adam in Eden
Username:cbridget cbridget
Uploaded:12 Jan 2010 - 2:02 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Portraits / people
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Debs_Rocker
12 Jan 2010 - 3:13 PM

well I like it, maybe try picking out the odd item in a bit of colour and see what it looks like? It might look rubbish but who knows?

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BlueRoom e2 Member 873 forum postsBlueRoom vcard United Kingdom19 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jan 2010 - 4:16 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Bridget. I like the look of your cover and think the grapics work extremely well, but because that part of the image is so crisp and clean I feel the blur on the figure doesn't fit in. It's not a problem where you are indicating movement but the feet and right side should be better defined in my opinon. I don't know if you have drawn the graphics yourself but if you are it would be great if the figure started as a drawing at the bottom and merged into the photo as it went up. Just an idea.

Eric

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cbridget  543 forum posts United Kingdom
12 Jan 2010 - 5:46 PM

Thanks both of you, great points and ideas! I like the idea of him starting out as an illustration! thanks BlueRoom and Debs I will give it a go, cheers!
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