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I wanted to give off a sense of adventure where i've been walking a long distance and experiencing spectacular views.
I thoroughly enjoy adventures these days, especially challenging ones. I've come to realise I actually find it slightly addicting? Nevertheless, I can't wait until my next adventure!

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D7000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-105.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:8 Jun 2013 - 2:13 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/13.0
Shutter Speed:1/400sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:Adventure
Username:iRIN382 iRIN382
Uploaded:26 Jun 2013 - 12:28 AM
Tags:Adventure, B&w, Clouds, Country side, Hills, Landscape / travel, Mountain, Road, Sky
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gwynn56
gwynn56  260 forum posts England
26 Jun 2013 - 1:05 AM

nice black and white image Smile

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gallero
gallero e2 Member 3gallero vcard Venezuela
26 Jun 2013 - 2:19 AM

Excelente manejo de las lineas.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jun 2013 - 8:28 AM

Decent scene with a road to nowhere. That is my problem. Doesn't say adventure to me and as there is no significant subject other than the road the eye just follows that to a dead end. May be just a touch bright. A little general darkening will increase impact I think.

Paul

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leontari
leontari e2 Member 1leontari vcard Greece
26 Jun 2013 - 9:50 AM

Lovely mono landscape. I like the angle you have caught the picture.
Effrossini

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 7394 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom968 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jun 2013 - 5:38 PM

I like the idea - the empty road rolling and curving out of sight - yes, it does convey a journey to me. Looking at the base-lines of the clouds, this needs quite a bit of rotation ant-clockwise. With cumulus clouds the base is generally horizontal.
The greys are a bit flat, I'd like to add some contrast - it will give a better sense of depth and distance, which after all is what this is all about.
Moira I'll upload a Modification shortly, to view Mods, click on the Modifications button under your upload, then on the thumbnail.

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iRIN382
iRIN382  1 United Kingdom
28 Jun 2013 - 2:36 AM

Oooooo I like what both of you have done in the modifications Paul & mrswoolybill! Thanks for your wise & teachful words. I will surely learn for next time!~ Grin

Rin

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