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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D MkIII
Lens:35mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:8 Feb 2014 - 4:38 PM
Focal Length:35mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.4
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:125
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Against The Wall
Username:paulbaybutphotography paulbaybutphotography
Uploaded:12 Feb 2014 - 12:46 AM
Tags:Beauty, Fashion, Female, Glamour, Portraits / people
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pablophotographer

Hi Paul,

I like the way the eyes are captured here.

I have found the space around the model too much and because I had no way to upload a manipulation, I did a blog post with a 90 degrees tilt to the right and cropped all the space around to make it look as she stands on her elbow and feet; the cropped space seemed to better match the placement of the hands for me.

[link removed by ePz]

Kindly,
pablophotographer

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peekay2001
12 Feb 2014 - 3:45 AM

beautiful image...

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saltireblue
saltireblue Site Moderator 43598 forum postssaltireblue vcard Norway23 Constructive Critique Points
12 Feb 2014 - 7:38 AM


Quote: Hi Paul,

I like the way the eyes are captured here.

I have found the space around the model too much and because I had no way to upload a manipulation, I did a blog post with a 90 degrees tilt to the right and cropped all the space around to make it look as she stands on her elbow and feet; the cropped space seemed to better match the placement of the hands for me.

[link removed by ePz]

Kindly,
pablophotographer

And it has been deleted. The blogs section is not for uploading mods, especially not on images by non e2 members who are not entitled to have mods.

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dudler
dudler Critique Team 1091 forum postsdudler vcard England258 Constructive Critique Points
12 Feb 2014 - 11:56 AM

And the mod, as described, is debatable...

This is delightfully off-centre: the model is falling into the frame, and the space on the left contains her.

I think this is a fun composition, in that it made me think, and it's caused debate.

Obviously, I accept the moderator logic: another point - brought home to me, very forcibly, when I did a mod a while back and sent it to the poster - is that enabling mods is a positive choice, and not enabling them may also be so. No-one can stop us downloading and playing, but we have an absolute lack of right to send such mods anywhere at all. My error was to suggest an improvement to what still strikes me as an iffy shot: the response was as if I had posted it as my own work in breach of copyright...

In other words, it can be construed as discourtesy to do and publish a mod - even to the poster alone. I woudl never want to be discourteous to fellow members, and I am sure that the same goes for all my friends and acquaintances here at EPZ.

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pablophotographer

I had titled it as a modification of the latest picture by Paul Baybut, so I did not claim anything as mine.
I did it this way because I could not post a modification here and
because I know it is impossible to send attachments in the current emailing format.

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NDODS e2 Member 32873 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
12 Feb 2014 - 1:33 PM

For me it works beautifully Paul...

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin

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derekhansen
derekhansen e2 Member 5179 forum postsderekhansen vcard United Kingdom21 Constructive Critique Points
12 Feb 2014 - 5:53 PM

Mods or no mods....I actually like this very much as it is Paul. The framing and lighting are excellent IMO.
Derek

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paulbaybutphotography

I actually took the image exactly as Pablo described on his preference but tilted it and expanded the frame purposely to give it added interest. away from the norm.
Everyone to their own though. I am easy on most opinions whether I agree or not. Smile

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pablophotographer


Quote: I actually took the image exactly as Pablo described on his preference but tilted it and expanded the frame purposely to give it added interest. away from the norm.
Everyone to their own though. I am easy on most opinions whether I agree or not. Smile

A very tight frame from all the sides, even above the head, makes her look like she is boxed Smile Great model and shot too Smile

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