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Continuing with my series of Alannah, this is a re-work of the first one I uploaded a few weeks back (Alannah 1). I readjusted the colour and texture, tilted the head and cropped closely to pinpoint the beautiful face and eyes of this lovely young model. I hope you like the result.
I am continually grateful for all the comments, critique and advice I have received from fellow members and I am using some of the information offered to improve on my portraiture work. It's good to know that there are many photographers on this site willing to help others and share their knowledge.
Many thanks to all for the lovely comments on all of my recent portraits and to those who have taken the time to upload modifications and suggestions.

Have a great weekend.
Fran xx

Camera:Canon Eos 40D
Lens:Canon EFS 18/55mm IS (kit lens)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Alannah 4
Username:franfoto franfoto
Uploaded:5 Dec 2009 - 1:40 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Another beautiful portrait Fran !

Chris

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DerekL
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5 Dec 2009 - 2:29 PM
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Nice modification to the original Fran.
I has certainly improved the image a lot.
Like the closer crop and the angle of the face and the skin colour is much better.
Well done.

Derek

Last Modified By DerekL at 5 Dec 2009 - 2:29 PM
Silverzone
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5 Dec 2009 - 3:32 PM
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Beautiful model, a lovely portrait. Sylvia

Steve_S
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5 Dec 2009 - 3:42 PM
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This rework has definitely improved the original Fran, great work
Steve (or is it Paul Wink )

Bob_V
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5 Dec 2009 - 4:03 PM
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What a gorgeous portrait Fran, such fantastic work on this one.
Bob

taggart
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5 Dec 2009 - 4:04 PM
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Beautiful eyes, so nicely showcased in this crop!
Love the hair detail as well!
JEnnnnn

pluckyfilly
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5 Dec 2009 - 4:20 PM
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beautiful

nickyv32
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5 Dec 2009 - 4:32 PM
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Another Beautiful....Grand shot

Nicky

Suehh
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5 Dec 2009 - 4:58 PM
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Beautiful portrait

Mynett
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5 Dec 2009 - 5:03 PM
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wonderful work again fran this is 1st class

Linda

barbarahirst
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5 Dec 2009 - 5:08 PM
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Superb
And thanks for telling us what you did to get such a wonderful result

SteveMoulding
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5 Dec 2009 - 5:10 PM
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This is such a very special and beautiful portrait, I had to let you know. Thankyou for kind words of support.
Steve.

teocali
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5 Dec 2009 - 5:51 PM
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I love what you have done with this Fran - the crop and angle really work so well and the skin tones and depth of detail in the eyes are superb. Beautiful hair colour and textures.
Sylvia

fentiger
5 Dec 2009 - 6:19 PM
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Delightful and highly attractive portrait.

Albert

iancam
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5 Dec 2009 - 6:52 PM
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Beautiful model and portrait Fran.
Ian

Roly
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5 Dec 2009 - 7:57 PM
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Lovely portrait and model.Nice work Fran.

goso
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5 Dec 2009 - 10:36 PM
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Beautiful, Fran...Bill

Maiwand
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5 Dec 2009 - 10:48 PM
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Superb light control Fran. That is a very pretty lady.
Ron

helenlinda
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6 Dec 2009 - 9:31 AM
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Great processing Fran
Helen

bricurtis
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6 Dec 2009 - 10:34 AM
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Looks a good result to me Fran. I like that you have filled the frame - such a lovely face - you have captured her skin texture well and I think her hair has a warmer tone than previous.
Brian.

MickyMc
6 Dec 2009 - 12:31 PM
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The detail is absolutely superb her skin texture is beautiful. Congratulations
Mavis

brownsilent
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6 Dec 2009 - 4:56 PM
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Absolutely beautiful work Fran - excellent portrait!
Johanna

Ps. I went back to the first image - definitely an improvement.

Last Modified By brownsilent at 6 Dec 2009 - 4:58 PM

impressive
Dennis

PeterLaw
7 Dec 2009 - 6:45 PM
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Just one word.
" Brilliant"
Peter

A beautiful model. Done a little mod. Smoothed her skin lighty.

Marilyn x

tigertimb
8 Dec 2009 - 12:08 AM
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Beautiful shot Fran and a great improved over the original; but I particularly like the way the slight rotation has made her expression appear wistful
Tim

FeatherFriend
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8 Dec 2009 - 2:54 PM
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A gorgeous looking model and photographed beautifully Fran, a big improvement on the original, all the tips and suggestions seem to be paying off nicely..........
Geoff xxx

Pegon
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8 Dec 2009 - 11:33 PM
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A beautiful portrait Fran, she's gorgeous.
Pete.

Thushari
9 Dec 2009 - 8:48 AM
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Beautiful portrait Fran. lovely model,

dawnmichelle
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12 Dec 2009 - 11:06 PM
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Beautiful portrait of her...

thanks for letting us do mods just to see what we can come up with...
You do such fantastic work... it is just fun to see what I can come with ..

Hope your doing well... Smile

franfoto
13 Dec 2009 - 1:05 AM
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Thanks to John, Marilyn & Dawn for the mods, It's great to see what you all come up with. My thanks to all who have taken time to comment and vote, another, more sophisticated one of Alannah coming up very soon........watch this space.
Fran

Glostopcat
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20 Dec 2009 - 9:27 PM
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A first class portrait of this beautiful young lady Fran, many thanks for the user award on "Bleak Midwinter" it is much appreciated especially coming from such a talented photographer as your good self, Ed

Stenno
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28 Sep 2010 - 10:25 PM
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Very nice, I really like this!

Geoff

PhillipMinnis
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5 May 2011 - 12:51 AM
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Another of your lovely portrait images! This one is just wonderful!


Cheers

Phil

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