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I'm currently testing the Strobeam portable battery pack flash system and used a dried daffodil as a subject. It's lit with one flash head and softbox. I'm using a Sony A57 to test out the flash's 14 frames per second FP mode. So this shot was also taken on the Sony.
It was colour but i though a quick refinement in Lightroom 4 would make it a more interesting image.

The background is a piece of Formica I picked up from B&Q which seems to work well. I added a vignette to darken the corners

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony Alpha A57
Lens:DT 18-55mm F3.5-5.6 SAM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:10 Apr 2012 - 4:43 PM
Focal Length:55mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.6
Aperture:f/13.0
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:All dried up
Username:Pete Pete
Uploaded:10 Apr 2012 - 5:31 PM
Tags:Daffodil, Flash / lighting, Flowers & plants, Still-life
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chase
chase (Critique Team)
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1059 forum postschase vcard England193 Constructive Critique Points
10 Apr 2012 - 5:53 PM
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Bg works well Pete but maybe to show this test off better you should have left it as a coloured image as yellows are a so & so to work with under lights,the colour blows so quickly & can look quite insipid with the wrong lighting.
I do like the position in the frame & the light looks ok on the mono version from where I'm sitting.

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AnneWorner
AnneWorner (e2 Member)
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576 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States39 Constructive Critique Points
10 Apr 2012 - 7:29 PM
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I like the placement of the daffodil in the frame and that you don't have that stem coming right out of the corner. Would have liked a colour version to work with for mono conversion - I've dabbled in Nik Silver Efex with it, but am not getting anything I like better than this Smile Don't know how much yellow was left in the dried bloom, but thought a yellow filter might give the flower itself a bit more punch and brightness in conversion.

Anne

Last Modified By Moderator Team at 10 Apr 2012 - 9:21 PM
Pete
Pete (ePHOTOzine Staff)
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18228 forum postsPete vcard ePz Advertiser England95 Constructive Critique Points
10 Apr 2012 - 9:21 PM
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Thanks for the votes and comments. I've uploaded the original as requested

pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly (e2 Member)
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208 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom32 Constructive Critique Points
10 Apr 2012 - 9:43 PM
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I like both shots but the colour might win by a smidgeon

SlowSong
SlowSong (e2 Member)
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3094 forum postsSlowSong vcard England28 Constructive Critique Points
10 Apr 2012 - 10:59 PM
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B/w for me. Good textures. Perhaps a bit more differentiation in tone between the outer and inner petals would give a bit more variation.
Chris

Richsr
Richsr (e2 Member)
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88 forum postsRichsr vcard England177 Constructive Critique Points
11 Apr 2012 - 12:12 PM
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Mono version for me the textures and details look good
Regards Richard

twelvemegs
twelvemegs (e2 Member)
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twelvemegs vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
11 Apr 2012 - 2:41 PM
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Superb detail in the mono version.

David

Jonny5874
13 Apr 2012 - 12:30 PM
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Fascinating work, version two here for me!

Jon

Cor
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Belgium
13 Apr 2012 - 2:12 PM
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The mono for me. Beautyful +++++
Cor.

Pete
Pete (ePHOTOzine Staff)
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18228 forum postsPete vcard ePz Advertiser England95 Constructive Critique Points
13 Apr 2012 - 2:50 PM
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Thanks for the comments, votes and modifications Smile

exposure
13 Apr 2012 - 7:19 PM
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V1,lovely mono tones,light,petal detail & presentation Pete
Pauline.

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