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Trying to capture the reflections. any advice on this would e appreciated.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-105.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:28 Apr 2012 - 6:43 AM
Focal Length:105mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:All in a row
Username:stevophoto stevophoto
Uploaded:30 Apr 2013 - 2:14 AM
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Diggeo
Diggeo e2 Member 1Diggeo vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
30 Apr 2013 - 11:01 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hallo Steve. I think the image is a little unbalanced in the first place. The reflections on the water are not so interesting and the space in the bottom of the photo looks empty. On the other hand, the upper part of the image is too crowded, with too many objects, that distracts from your theme (the boats). I've uploaded a cropped version limiting the frame around the boats and the nice fence.
Because of the dull weather the image looks flat. I think it needs some more contrast and saturation.
All the best,
George

Last Modified By Diggeo at 30 Apr 2013 - 11:02 AM

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 8530 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1094 Constructive Critique Points
30 Apr 2013 - 12:58 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi, and welcome to the Critique gallery, I think this is your first upload here!
This is attractive - I'm very fond of the squiggly (we pride ourselves on technical language here Wink ) reflections that slightly disturbed water gives to lines. I like the way you have composed this mainly for the reflections.
George above makes two interesting points - first that the picture seems unbalanced. I think that this is because the water is quite light in colour, darkening it would give more weight to the lower part of the frame. Secondly that the upper part of the frame seems crowded - I do think a crop at the sides would concentrate attention on the boats and their reflections, make them more important.
At first sight I thought this looked slightly tilted. Looking closely, the wooden rail is horizontal and the reflections drop down vertically from the masts - I think what I saw was an optical illusion caused by the diagonal line of the jetty.
There's a group of nasty black blobs in the bottom left corner of the frame - I'm not sure if they are dust bunnies or litter in the water, but the image would be better off without them! I'll try a quick Mod.
Moira

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 8530 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1094 Constructive Critique Points
30 Apr 2013 - 1:08 PM

I've uploaded a Mod. I cropped the sides a bit, then lightened the sky (dodge tool, set to midtones, 3% exposure, large brush size) and darkened the water (burn tool, again 3% exposure, large brush, first midtones then shadows). Then I cleaned up the water in that bottom left corner.
I think the darker tone at the bottom of the frame prevents the image gives a better balanced feel, see what you think.
Just one more point - I've kept your black frame, but looking again I do think it's a bit heavy, dark. Can I suggest that you include a thin white line, just a few pixels, inside the black, to brighten the effect? It's purely cosmetic, but presentation can make a big difference.
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 30 Apr 2013 - 1:14 PM

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stevophoto
stevophoto e2 Member 8stevophoto vcard United States
2 May 2013 - 10:43 PM

Thanks A lot for the help guys much appreciated. Moira the black spots are oil or fuel in the water and I didn't notice it until you mentioned it.
Again thanks for all the tips

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