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spurn point early morning

Brand:Nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D7000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:17-50mm f/2.8 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:14 Jun 2011 - 5:50 AM
Focal Length:28mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/90sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:all that remains
Username:KONIN KONIN
Uploaded:7 Sep 2011 - 1:24 PM
Tags:Landscape / seascape, Landscape / travel
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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8769 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1598 Constructive Critique Points
7 Sep 2011 - 9:32 PM

Hello, Stuart. Groynes like this are always of interest, and cause the viewer to ponder upon the constant erosion by the sea. These man-made structures suffer so much from the forces of nature. You have good detail, a nice lean and some strong shadows, a colourful sky and good perspective. What the image lacks most of all is impact. Simply shooting when there is a good cloud formation in the sky, or at sunset, can make so much difference. A simple subject like this can turn into a masterpiece.
If this was taken at 5.50am, as it says above, I would assume that you were hoping for a spectacular sunrise and some warm glow on the groynes. So your intentions were good. I would like to have seen a bit more space on the left, giving added depth. and allowing the groynes to be over to the right.
You might like to have a look at these.
Pamela.

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KONIN e2 Member 3252 forum postsKONIN vcard England
8 Sep 2011 - 8:46 AM

thank you for your advice,after 2.5hrs travel through the night it was a perfectly clear morning,also iam still wearing" L" plates and have along way to go yet.things are looking up though iam attending a workshop in norfolk in a couple of weeks,thanks again stu

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