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taken at a summer fair last year in poor lighting condition which haded to the sceen at the time of taking.

Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 18-55m
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:all the fun of the fair
Username:tonytyke59 tonytyke59
Uploaded:31 Jul 2010 - 6:47 PM
Tags:Fair, Landscape / travel, Night / low light, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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Graham-Mead
31 Jul 2010 - 7:28 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I think that this is one of those shots which rely on timing. Had you take this shot 1 second earlier you might have had all face on it. I am a big believer in cropping when ever you can. Having said that I do like the composition you can tell that at least one of them is having fun. I think I would perhaps add a little saturation just to bring the colours out a bit more.
I hope that this has helped you at all.
Graham.

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Jestertheclown
1 Aug 2010 - 5:24 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

As has been said, the timing's slightly off although I doubt that you could have done much about that.
It's a bit flat and in need of a lift. I've increased the overall saturation and pushed the yellow in particular since that seems to be the predominant colour.
Those clouds look promising too, not for a day out necessarily (!), but from a photographic point of view they're got potential.
Hope this helps,
Bren.
Edit; with hindsight, and we've all got a degree in that, I think I should have darkened the shadows a touch.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 1 Aug 2010 - 5:27 PM

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Jestertheclown

A mod. of my mod.
I've just darkened the mid tones slightly in levels.
Bren.

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