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Camera:Sony Cyber-shot DSC-F828
Lens:built-in
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:am i sexy?
Username:iyunk_cruise iyunk_cruise
Uploaded:27 Jan 2009 - 4:32 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Fashion, Girl, Indonesian girl, Portraits / people, Sexy
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PeterLaw
PeterLaw  6 United Kingdom
27 Jan 2009 - 4:42 AM

A well taken shot, very good work. Lovely Model.
Peter

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wasper
wasper e2 Member 8532 forum postswasper vcard Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jan 2009 - 5:07 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

The light is slightly harsh on the left cheekbone & just above her top. A red spot on right nipple & a black spot at the extreme left bottom side. I think you need to have a better focus on her eyes. Or is too late at night & I can't see that well.
She is a stunning model & hope to see more of her.

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Davesumner
27 Jan 2009 - 10:45 PM

Hey nice shot and yes she is sexy but I think there are several things that could improve this shot. Get closer, choose a background and top that don't clash together and just frame the subject better. To me she should have been a little more at the right of the frame rather than the left where her elbow is cut off. It's okay to cut off parts of the body but here it doesn't look deliberate. Her eyes seem to be sharp which is important when taking these portrait type shots.

A great attempt.

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kombizz
kombizz  9591 forum posts United States1 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jan 2009 - 10:08 AM

of course you are
nice one

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ToothPilot
29 Jan 2009 - 7:29 AM

I like Dave's crop and levels. The soft gentle focus is ok for me. The background and top now works with this composition.

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Wellspring
2 Feb 2009 - 11:17 AM

I like this image - it has great warmth and appeal, but to answer the question she does look sexy but she it does not look like she knows it fully.

I have enjoyed playing with the image and have uploaded three mods. I concentrated on increasing the contrast and making the colours stronger.

I also found that my eye was darting around the image quite a lot. I did not want to crop out the bottom of the picture so I cloned out the skin while keeping the lovely curve of her body. I cropped the RHS to bring more balance and strengthen to the image and cropped the top to tie it more to the left arm bringing the image more together.

Thanks for posting this image it has been a delight seeing your images as usual!

John

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