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Another with Amanda with her hair in the air. Partially from a head flick and partially from a fan.

Amanda on purpleport http://purpleport.com/portfolio/aswan/

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:27 Jul 2013 - 2:42 PM
Focal Length:40mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Amanda with flyaway hair
Username:JackAllTog JackAllTog
Uploaded:31 Jul 2013 - 10:35 PM
Tags:Amanda Swan, Hair, Jeans, Portrait, Portraits / people
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johnlw
johnlw e2 Member 7johnlw vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
31 Jul 2013 - 10:57 PM

Super model with lovely bright eyes Smilesame as she had yesterdaySmilegreat image very nice light.
Regards John.

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nonur
nonur e2 Member 5nonur vcard Turkey8 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2013 - 4:42 AM

Another great shot with raised hair, Stuart.

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gonzalito
gonzalito e2 Member 4gonzalito vcard United Kingdom12 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2013 - 9:06 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I look at this photo and I'm not sure what story is it telling! On one side, we have a lot of dynamics going on; on the other side, we have a extremely static pose! The two, simply don't go along. In my opinion, a portrait should tell a story; not many stories. In my eyes, it should have been either one of two:

1. Static pose, static hair - in this case, light, pose, look (eyes) & view point - would have played a major role in the end result

2. Dynamic pose, diagonal composition - here, obviously the light, composition, view point, ... would have also played a major role; but the end-result would have defenitely been given by the dynamics

As it is now, 1st thing I asked myself was:
"What's with the hair; why is it in the air? She is standing still!"

I have seen photos with static pose and some dynamics introduced by the hair flying and stuff ... a lot of that in magazines - but, at least the model is looking in the viewer's eyes! And that makes a huge difference I think; it is far more engaging and ads dynamics to the whole!

I don't have your studio experience but, as you know, I love my portraits Smile - when I take one, 99% of the times I have the end result in my head - this portrait seems a bit random to me!

I hope you see what I mean; I also hope I was not too harsh.

Last Modified By gonzalito at 1 Aug 2013 - 9:11 PM

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JackAllTog
JackAllTog e2 Member 53469 forum postsJackAllTog vcard United Kingdom58 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2013 - 10:13 PM

Thanks for al the comments, its really nice to hear what peoples opinions are. At them moment i'm just mostly working towards fashion style images.

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