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Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:50mm f1.8
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Amie
Username:scrimmy scrimmy
Uploaded:30 May 2010 - 5:32 PM
Tags:Black & white, Portraits / people
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AnneWorner
AnneWorner e2 Member 6612 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States42 Constructive Critique Points
30 May 2010 - 7:05 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Ian,
Let me say what I really like here, then what I think can be improved.

To me the lighting and exposure looks very good. Again, you have very good contact with Amie, and she appears relaxed. Very good focus and nice and sharp image.

The background seems all too dark to me, my screen here might be a problem for my viewing though.

Also, I'm not crazy about the cut off chair - it might work better if the chair is turned more towards the camera, also I think a pose with Amie more towards the camera would be beneficial.

You might also try a posing stool for another upload, one without a back to it, that way there are no distraction arm rests etc.

I hope there will be more comments on this. This seems to be going in a positive direction forward Smile Hope you upload again soon!

Anne

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Daisymaye
Daisymaye e2 Member 6Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
31 May 2010 - 1:35 AM

I keep looking at her feet. I really like this though, and being I'm not sure what works and what doesn't I'm just giving you my first impression..............Sandy

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davidbailie
davidbailie e2 Member 11451 forum postsdavidbailie vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
31 May 2010 - 8:17 AM

Hi

Yes in some respects Wefi imo is pretty right ... I think back light is needed to separate the subject from the BG and will help define the chair - also perhaps some light on the bg will help in that respect.

Not overfussed about the cut off chair! .. I feel though the subject is slighty lossed in all that space.

But she overall comes out well

db

Last Modified By davidbailie at 31 May 2010 - 8:18 AM

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scrimmy
scrimmy e2 Member 6366 forum postsscrimmy vcard Scotland5 Constructive Critique Points
31 May 2010 - 9:58 AM

Hi people, thank you stopping by and commenting on my photo, it is very much appreciated. I just had to get those boots in Sandy, I had a similar pair myself many years ago. David, I deliberately darkened the background to hide the creases (not being iron savvy Smile ) and as always your comments and encouragement is appreciated.
Ian

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