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Ok, so this is not original. In fact it's a tribute to the great Mr Angus Clyne (look him up) and he did it much better, but he should, he's a proper photographer - i'm still learning.
Anyway it's in the Northwood, Kinclaven, Scotland (haunted??.......hm!!). Straight exposure on a tripod that has had some saturation improved on the trunks in PS Elements. I used some fill flash on the nearby tree as it was a rather dull morning, but i love the way the tree is sort of waiting to charge the other.
Angus did it brilliantly, i hope mine does at least some justice.
Critique the exposure, but not the content as i can't really take credit for that.
| Brand: | NIKON CORPORATION |
| Camera: | Nikon D3100 |
| Lens: | Tamron 10.0-24.0 mm f/3.5-4.5 |
| Recording media: | RAW (digital) |
| Date Taken: | 18 Jan 2013 - 8:50 AM |
| Focal Length: | 11mm |
| Lens Max Aperture: | f/3.6 |
| Aperture: | f/16.0 |
| Shutter Speed: | 1sec |
| Exposure Comp: | 0.0 |
| ISO: | 100 |
| Exposure Mode: | Manual |
| Metering Mode: | Multi-segment |
| Flash: | Fill Flash |
| White Balance: | As Shot |
| Title: | Angus-Lite |
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| Uploaded: | 21 Jan 2013 - 4:45 PM |
| Tags: | General, Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature |
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Great angle, the roots lead you in to the second tree very effectively and beyond that the woods clearly have lots of depth. the greens and whites are a lovely combination and your flash is subtle and natural. I think the conifers on the left help frame it. The only constructive criticism I can think to offer is that the area of sky between the trunks of the main tree at the top R corner is a bit distracting. Moving your camera forward a bit might have got rid of this at the time but it's really not too distracting because at least there is a trunk on the frame edge. All in all an excellent image to be proud of. ![]()
Hi Steve, welcome to EPZ.
The subject is really good. The exposure works depending on your intent, but imo its under. Using the flash was a good idea, but perhaps not enough power. The wide angle seems to have introduced a little vignetting.
The colour balance is also a little too cool, - again you may like it that way, but unless you intentionally adjusted WB, it should be a little warmer.
Ive uploaded a mod with a little increase in exposure, and colour balance less cool. Also a duo toned version.
A very nice shot,
Regards
Willie
Quote: Hi Steve, welcome to EPZ.
The subject is really good. The exposure works depending on your intent, but imo its under. Using the flash was a good idea, but perhaps not enough power. The wide angle seems to have introduced a little vignetting.
The colour balance is also a little too cool, - again you may like it that way, but unless you intentionally adjusted WB, it should be a little warmer.
Ive uploaded a mod with a little increase in exposure, and colour balance less cool. Also a duo toned version.
A very nice shot,
Regards
Willie
hi and many thanks i think your right, both those mods work well, i actually prefer the mono one now to my original - great advice, thanks again.
A nice viewpoint. Composition is relevant because I have no idea who you are talking about and I have no photographic heroes as such. Everyone produces good images and poor ones. This is strong, but I might have considered a bit more light from the flash with a little spilling onto the main trunk to lift the brightness a touch.
Paul
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