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This is a natural light portrait of my wife taken on a little trip out on thursday for some fresh air. I used my lens wide open at 2.8 for max background blur.
Would like to thank Pulsar69 for buying me a epz subscription for my birthday today! Smile Happy new year everyone.

Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:Canon EF-S 17-55mm F2.8 IS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Another brick on the wall
Username:kenraw kenraw
Uploaded:1 Jan 2011 - 11:09 AM
Tags:Head shot, Portraits / people, Wall
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Nice lady and photo

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1 Jan 2011 - 11:13 AM

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debu
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India
1 Jan 2011 - 11:13 AM
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Lovely image.
debu

Curtain
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1 Jan 2011 - 11:14 AM
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Lovely depth and great eye contact. My only suggestion would be to darken the upper right area, which tends to drag the viewers eye away from the subject. Has my vote.
Nick

Constructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique!
pulsar69
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1 Jan 2011 - 11:21 AM
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Lovely shot ken crisp and tack focus just as you like it ! looking forward to seeing more of your work large , happy birthday

pauldawn
1 Jan 2011 - 11:34 AM
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nice shot, lovely model

kenraw
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United Kingdom
1 Jan 2011 - 1:38 PM
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Quote: Lovely depth and great eye contact. My only suggestion would be to darken the upper right area, which tends to drag the viewers eye away from the subject. Has my vote.
Nick

I agree with your comment, I had already darkened that whole section of wall as it was much brighter than the subject. However to darken any thurther was causing artifacting. The trade off from using natural light with exposure set for subjects face.

Curtain
Curtain (e2 Member)
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1 Jan 2011 - 2:26 PM
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Hi Ken
Shooting RAW will enable you to push the file harder, so you can make 2 exposures and blend them together in PS or Elements. Alternatively, try duplicating the layer with blend set to multiply and use a mask. More than happy to help with this if I can.

kenraw
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United Kingdom
1 Jan 2011 - 3:27 PM
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Quote: Hi Ken
Shooting RAW will enable you to push the file harder, so you can make 2 exposures and blend them together in PS or Elements. Alternatively, try duplicating the layer with blend set to multiply and use a mask. More than happy to help with this if I can.

yeah this was a raw file but that part was fairly blown out to start with, I can darken it a bit more to be fair but at the same time it was a natural light shot and I have another version of it where I used flash so I could set the exposure of the wall seperately, they are two different looks so in this case I dont need to make the shot look like it was a flash shot. Thanks for your comment.

pulsar69
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1 Jan 2011 - 7:23 PM
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I would suggest the best thing to do is upload this again with modifications enabled and let people show you what they can do ? then take it from there if you like any of the mods ask them for advice ... I can see whats being said but can also see theres not much can be done with it ?

pulsar69
pulsar69 (e2 Member)
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1 Jan 2011 - 7:36 PM
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On looking at it further too , the point could easily be made that this is an urban portrait and to have a perfect backdrop would completely defeat the object , the painted or marked wall adds its own characteristic to the shot which could be seen either way.

Curtain
Curtain (e2 Member)
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2 Jan 2011 - 6:25 AM
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Totally agree. I was merely suggesting that the brighter upper right portion was distracting.

kenraw
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United Kingdom
2 Jan 2011 - 1:29 PM
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Quote: Totally agree. I was merely suggesting that the brighter upper right portion was distracting.

Ive put the flash version on now so you can see the difference, thanks for your comments, always appreciated. Ken.

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