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Yes I was in the brambles for this one and have the scratches to show for it (serves me right for wearing cropped jeans).

Any hints and suggestions on how I can improve butterfly shots gratefully received.

Best wishes
Carole

Brand:Pentax
Camera:Pentax K-r Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:TAMRON SP AF 90mm F2.8 Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:27 Jul 2012 - 4:13 PM
Focal Length:90mm
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
Exposure Comp:-1.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Another gatekeeper
Username:CaroleS CaroleS
Uploaded:1 Aug 2012 - 8:32 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Gatekeeper, General, Wildlife / nature
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Tibetan
Tibetan  2 England
1 Aug 2012 - 8:35 AM

Nice detail good shot like it, regards Leon.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 8:40 AM

Like the good details and colours in this Carole, prehaps worth looking at a crop in from the top of about an inch, will focus you more on the subject.
Regards Richard

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fentiger
fentiger e2 Member 13915 forum postsfentiger vcard England22 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 8:50 AM

The only suggestion I would make is try (not always easy) to get down to the same level as the butterfly.
This is however a fine detailed and attractive image.

Albert

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CarolG
CarolG e2 Member 7128 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece17 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 9:01 AM

Well captured, Carole, I know just what it's like scrambling through brambles for a photo Smile Carol

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Trev_B
Trev_B e2 Member 7110 forum postsTrev_B vcard England64 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 9:15 AM

Lovely detail Carole, I like Richards suggestion re the crop. Try using the grid and applying the rule of thirds to get it eye on or near a thirds intersection. Although it's only a rule and they can be broken if it does not fit the image.

Trev

Last Modified By Trev_B at 1 Aug 2012 - 9:20 AM

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RonnieAG
RonnieAG e2 Member 4139 forum postsRonnieAG vcard Scotland112 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 9:51 AM

Good strong side lighting helping to show off all the detail.
Ronnie.

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SUE118
SUE118 e2 Member 6SUE118 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 10:00 AM

Superb.

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43242 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom103 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 10:02 AM

A really beautiful photograph depicting this gorgeous Gatekeeper, so wonderfully filled with natural colours and great detail.

Regards Nathan

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 4Irishkate vcard United Kingdom73 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 10:13 AM

Lovely light on the butterfly and a good diagonal
which would be even better with that suggested crop.
I haven't captured one insect this summer so you're one up!
KateGrinGrin

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barbarahirst
barbarahirst e2 Member 6barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 10:22 AM

ohdear ..... scratches for this beauty .... well worth them

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lostnspace2011
1 Aug 2012 - 10:27 AM

The things we do Carole to get the perfect shot Smile Well worth it though Smile Nice capture

Mark

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EMJAYCEE
EMJAYCEE e2 Member 5EMJAYCEE vcard England10 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 10:50 AM

Think the scratches were worth it Carole - at least it kept still for you to get this beauty.
Joan.

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ringyneck
ringyneck  7308 forum posts United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 10:51 AM

Harsh light and brambles........and still you get the shot...nice one.

I used to wear shorts ALL THE TIME....but even in the summer (???) I now keep covered up after something nibbled away at my leg and it swelled right up and was really painful. But I remember getting the shot while it was biting though...lol

Keith

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moiral
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1 Aug 2012 - 11:52 AM

Looking at this shot must make the scratches worth it Carole. Beautiful shot. Moira

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digital_boi
1 Aug 2012 - 11:57 AM

fine detail light and shadow worth the scratches mefinks!!

GrahamGrinGrinGrin

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achieverswales
1 Aug 2012 - 12:53 PM

This is excellent Carole, we should be asking you for tips! Several tips above are excellent! Might be good to upload a second image after following advice, one thing to be aware of when scrambling through undergrowth and laying on grass! There are things there like ticks that can cause serious problems, when I go for macro images at Llanelli Wetlands and getting into all sorts of places I wear Stealth Gear Leggings, these can be worn just up to the calf or up to the knee, they protect from stings bites and other nasty things you encounter, they also keep the bottom of your trousers dry, so worth considering.

Regards

Trev.

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prabhusinha
prabhusinha e2 Member 6prabhusinha vcard India3 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 1:29 PM

A great macro.

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mikbee
mikbee e2 Member 7mikbee vcard Scotland7 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 1:59 PM

You must adopt a more sensible dress code when out shooting butterflies Carole.
To cover the bare flesh showing with your cropped jeans,I suggest a pair of knee length riding boots.
Off course I can understand with you being a woman,you must have the matching accesories too.
I suggest light tan riding britches,frilly white blouse and a red jacket with a black velvet collar.
No need for that silly hat they wear as you will not be taking butterfly shots on horseback.
(But if you do feel like doing that,then by all means do so !!)
Mick.

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taggart
taggart e2 Member 1042 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 2:28 PM

I would love to captureone of these-- brambles aside, do watch out for insects and other nasties!

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danbrann
danbrann e2 Member 10473 forum postsdanbrann vcard 15 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 2:44 PM

This shot is certainly upto scratch Carole.A superb image.

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TrevBatWCC
TrevBatWCC e2 Member 6TrevBatWCC vcard England8 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 3:08 PM

I can't offer any tips, Carole, and if I'd captured a shot as good as this, I'd be really chuffed! Wink
Trev Smile

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franken
franken e2 Member 123130 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 3:35 PM

Very nice Carole.

I can't help re improving butterfly shots. My entire archives consists of about three usable images of them, they see my coming and flutter away! Sad

Ken

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andylea
andylea  537 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 5:45 PM

wonderful comp carole brilliant detail and tones a beauty nice one Wink
andy

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canonfan
canonfan  4 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2012 - 6:21 PM

Superb composition Carole and lovely light
Jim

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lifesnapper
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1 Aug 2012 - 6:48 PM

Nice light and shade on this one Carole.

John Smile

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Lillian
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1 Aug 2012 - 7:23 PM

Beautifully captured Carol
Lillian

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michaelo
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1 Aug 2012 - 7:51 PM

great detail,excellent focus,brilliant colours!!!

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tommyld
tommyld e2 Member 4tommyld vcard United Kingdom
1 Aug 2012 - 8:09 PM

Lovely detailed Macro Carole.
Tom

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pluckyfilly
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1 Aug 2012 - 8:26 PM

WELL! anytime I am poised for a shot and ready to press the shutter the blighter has flown so IMHO you did well - very well indeedSmile

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pdcche
pdcche  4 United Kingdom
1 Aug 2012 - 8:35 PM

Nice capture and such detail Carole, Peter..

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Maiwand
Maiwand e2 Member 7Maiwand vcard England69 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 8:44 PM

The quality of focus and exposure on the butterfly is superb Carole and it would certainly be worth considering a closer crop there by giving much more emphasis to the 'Keeper which is after all the main subject of the composition. Not much else needed I feel.
Ron

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8769 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1598 Constructive Critique Points
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Some good advice above, Carole.
Since this one was taken under difficult conditions, I wouldn't want to be critical. You have managed to get the head sharply in focus, and that's the important bit. How much depth of field you choose is up to you, whether you want all of the wings in focus or not. With the aperture used here, you have the whole thing in focus, which I like. How much of your background gets diffused will depend on its distance from your subject, but this one looks good.
Continuous shooting is a good option, at least you get something, even if you delete most of them. I have combined this with, firstly, a long shot, creeping closer and closer, shooting all the time, in case the butterfly flies off. Nine times out of ten, I get close enough for the desired shot.
Just a few pointers:-
Try to avoid harsh shadows over your subject and avoid strong light if the butterfly is a light colour.
Position your subject in the frame so that it has room in front of it to "fly into".
Always be aware of your background, which is often forgotten in a panic to get the shot.
Butterflies tend to move around less during the morning and evening.
Try to approach them so your shadow doesn't cover them as they'll tend to fly off in search of a sunnier spot.
Here is an EPZ tutorial you might find useful, and I laughed when I read the first line, "You may end up chasing around after your chosen subject endlessly, getting stung by nettles and covered in all manner of bugs and ruining your clothes with grass stains in the process." Also, I got the last two pointers above from this one, which is very useful. I've just discovered another one here on insects in general, which I also hope you find gives you some hints.
Pamela.

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Brian65
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1 Aug 2012 - 9:24 PM

Lovely shot Carole, sorry no tips, i was going to ask you when you get shots like this.SmileSmileTongueTongueWink
Brian

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AnnChown
AnnChown e2 Member 4183 forum postsAnnChown vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
2 Aug 2012 - 2:18 PM

I certainly can't offer any advice but I'd love to have taken this myself! (I tried yesterday at Wisley with the one (white) butterfly I saw and failed miserably!). Looks as if you have enough advice above - so good luck and I look forward to seeing more! Smile
Ann

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ChristineD
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2 Aug 2012 - 6:42 PM

A beautiful photograph

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5 Aug 2012 - 5:43 PM

Terrific detail and colours in this close up Carole, it's always easier to approach butterflies when there is a hint of cloud cover, when it is bright sunshine they are at their most active and most difficult to approach

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