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First of all, thank you all very much for your helpful suggestions and ideas about my previous uploading.
I'd like to thank Lynne here for her MODs and her beautiful border inspiration. I imitated on this one, not sure that I've get the colour right...
This is the landscape format that I took as well as the last uploading. I think that you prefer to see this oneSmile. Put it on to thank you all for your kind comments and support.

Camera:Canon EOS 5D MkIII
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:29 May 2013 - 6:19 PM
Focal Length:35mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Username:xwang xwang
Uploaded:4 Sep 2013 - 7:36 PM
Tags:Arcade, Arch, Architecture, Leeds, Low light, Man, Shop, Window, Yorkshire
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boov  2 United Kingdom
4 Sep 2013 - 7:38 PM

Excellent shot

ColleenA e2 Member 2204 forum postsColleenA vcard Australia3 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2013 - 7:38 PM

I like the crop, so much better.....well done....i also like your borderGrinGrinGrinGrin

NDODS e2 Member 43672 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom107 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2013 - 7:52 PM

Superb, what a difference to the whole image. very well done and with a huge touch of class...

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin

WhiteRose1 e2 Member 41116 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England137 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2013 - 8:06 PM

Can't fault this one, Jasmine, and a lovely presentation.


Ted447 e2 Member 180 forum postsTed447 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2013 - 8:07 PM

Really great image.TedGrinGrin

HarrietH e2 Member 4269 forum postsHarrietH vcard Portugal
4 Sep 2013 - 8:09 PM

Now it is really beautiful. A fabulous image Jasmine.


pamelajean Critique Team 8829 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2013 - 8:27 PM

I didn't dislike your last one, Jasmine (see comment).
I like the way you have "framed" the arcade with the ceiling this time, and the positioning of the walking man is good.
Your floor lines are much better in this one.
Your eye for symmetry is getting so much betterm and this place much be quite a nightmare to get right.

richmowil e2 Member 5279 forum postsrichmowil vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2013 - 8:49 PM

Great presentation of this fine image!!

leontari e2 Member 2leontari vcard Greece
4 Sep 2013 - 8:51 PM

Yes, much better now Jasmine. A splendid image.

LynneJoyce e2 Member 6LynneJoyce vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2013 - 10:35 PM

All of the above - much better than the previous one.

Fefe e2 Member 3Fefe vcard United Kingdom30 Constructive Critique Points
4 Sep 2013 - 10:43 PM

Much much better...... great imageGrinGrin

Hermanus  2 South Africa
5 Sep 2013 - 4:27 AM

This is a super and very pleasing image Jasmine !!

nonur e2 Member 6nonur vcard Turkey8 Constructive Critique Points
5 Sep 2013 - 7:14 AM

Super image, I like this crop better. I think a square crop would work as well.

Philip_H  2 United Kingdom
8 Sep 2013 - 5:58 PM

Love the asymmetrical element provided by the perfectly placed figure.


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