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An Attempt at an arty audi.

Title:Arty Audi
Username:funkymonkeyuk funkymonkeyuk
Uploaded:22 Mar 2008 - 8:05 PM
Camera:nikon D70 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Sigma 10-20
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Tags:Audi rain car curves, Landscape / travel, Transport
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CathR
CathR (Critique Team)
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134 forum posts United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
22 Mar 2008 - 8:08 PM
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The top two thirds works OK with the water drops and the sky. It would be more successful if there was more detail in the bottom third which is pretty much blanked out. What is that line going up into the sky?

Catherine

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Its badly placed telegraph wire! wasn't sure on the best way to PS it out. Thanks for your comments by the way!

Neil

Agree with Catherine, not a bad pic, Ive sent a mod

Colin

pamelajean
pamelajean (Critique Team)
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468 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1053 Constructive Critique Points
22 Mar 2008 - 8:51 PM
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The raindrops captured are the most interesting element in this for me. Have tried a mod, now to remember what I did.
I used the highlights/shadow option to bring the bottom into view; selected the sky, took out the white area, re-coloured it. Removed the triangle on the top of the car, as well as the pole, by cloning. Added contrast, sharpened.

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