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This is Ashley again, her first time modeling and the last of these photo's.

Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:17-55
Recording media:TIFF (digital)
Title:Ashley #
Username:CathyT CathyT
Uploaded:1 May 2008 - 7:42 AM
Tags:Fashion, Portraits / people
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paulsimmons
1 May 2008 - 7:47 AM

Morning sweet

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SandraKay
SandraKay e2 Member 7233 forum postsSandraKay vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 7:49 AM

Good contrast between the old, rough textures and the young model.
Sandra

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CathyT
CathyT e2 Member 87271 forum postsCathyT vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 7:50 AM

Thanks you too.....I can't believe I've posted so early...The dogs been barking all night so in the end I gave in and got up ( she wanted to play..gggrrrr).........it feels like mid morning now.

Last Modified By CathyT at 1 May 2008 - 7:51 AM

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Mike Gray
Mike Gray  9382 forum posts United Kingdom
1 May 2008 - 7:58 AM

Shame its the last one :-(

Mike

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CathyT
CathyT e2 Member 87271 forum postsCathyT vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 8:02 AM

Thanks Mike

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rontear
rontear e2 Member 11rontear vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 8:12 AM

Liked the series Cathy, model was well photographed by you. Your experience shone through. Ron.

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England207 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 9:00 AM

Like the lighting and details in this Cathy - well captured.
It's been a good series of images.
Regards Richard.

Last Modified By Richsr at 1 May 2008 - 9:00 AM

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kaybee
kaybee  103761 forum posts Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 10:13 AM

Loving the contrast in the working barn and the fancy dresses in these shots

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CathyT
CathyT e2 Member 87271 forum postsCathyT vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 10:14 AM

Thanks Kaybee.

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debster
debster  10693 forum posts England3 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 1:09 PM

Hi Cathy,

What a wonderful set of images......Ashley and Taylor must be delighted with them Smile

Debbie

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CathyT
CathyT e2 Member 87271 forum postsCathyT vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 4:07 PM

They haven't seen them yet...LOL

Do you know them, they are Danielle's friends.

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debster
debster  10693 forum posts England3 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 4:15 PM

Hi Cathy,

Yes, I know them. I'm going to show Colin when I get home.....I doubt Danielle has seen them yet either then!

You've done a wonderful job - I'm sure they will be over the moon with them!

Debbie x

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CathyT e2 Member 87271 forum postsCathyT vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 5:21 PM

Thanks Debbie. Smile

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Westers
Westers  93905 forum posts Burkina Faso1 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 9:33 PM

Really like this - reminds me of Alice in Wonderland. And no I'm not being a perv.. :o)

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CathyT
CathyT e2 Member 87271 forum postsCathyT vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 10:04 PM

Hello stranger....still got your all over tan??

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Westers
Westers  93905 forum posts Burkina Faso1 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 11:10 PM

You're joking aren't you ? Westers junior would need factor 300 if he was exposed to the sun...he's a bit like a mole - likes dark and moist tunnels and hates the sun... Wink

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CathyT e2 Member 87271 forum postsCathyT vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
2 May 2008 - 11:13 AM

PMSL......what are you like.

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sparklep  7146 forum posts1 Constructive Critique Points
2 May 2008 - 9:24 PM

Keep her away from that barbed wire. Great photo.

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2 May 2008 - 11:16 PM

Great combination of glamour and grittiness.

Stuart

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culturedcanvas
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Technically a very good shot in my opinion. However in terms of composition Im not convinced. The use of the light above is a little cliche and although it does provide illumination to the face the fact that the girl is staring out through what appears tobe corrugated plastic doesnt really appeal ... she cant be enjoying the view for sure! Both because of the level and the subject ...

To make this work better I think there needs to be less space between her and the light, or alternatively to not have her focus directed at the light itself.

I do like cluttered compositions but the positioning of the other items dont work too well for me either. The ladder is too far left and would have been better placed more towards the middle .. where it would give better balance. I do like the wire though.

Outfit and model are both excellent and I quite like the dressed up feel in a dressed down location ...

Overall a very good shot but not as good as you are capable of in my opinion.

Dan

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CathyT
CathyT e2 Member 87271 forum postsCathyT vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
4 May 2008 - 8:14 PM

Thank you Dan...I felt this was my weakest out of the four and of course you are right about her gaze....


I would argue that some girls like corrugated plastic ...thats if I knew any. LOL

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stix
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9 May 2008 - 7:37 PM

Have to agree with Dan, I don't understand what this picture is for. Sorry.......Or am I missing something. Whats the underlying narrative?
Glamerous building inspector? Smile

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CathyT
CathyT e2 Member 87271 forum postsCathyT vcard United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2008 - 8:44 PM

HHHmmmm...your not wrong. I wasn't going to post this one..next time I'll stick with my instincts.

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tepot
tepot  94416 forum posts United Kingdom
21 Dec 2008 - 5:43 AM

I like this alot, the lighting is good for me and since the meaning of the image isn't obvious, you can read whatever you like into it.

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