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This is Ashley again, her first time modeling and the last of these photo's.
| Camera: | Nikon D200 |
| Lens: | 17-55 |
| Recording media: | TIFF (digital) |
| Title: | Ashley # |
| Username: | |
| Uploaded: | 1 May 2008 - 7:42 AM |
| Tags: | Fashion, Portraits / people |
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Comments
Technically a very good shot in my opinion. However in terms of composition Im not convinced. The use of the light above is a little cliche and although it does provide illumination to the face the fact that the girl is staring out through what appears tobe corrugated plastic doesnt really appeal ... she cant be enjoying the view for sure! Both because of the level and the subject ...
To make this work better I think there needs to be less space between her and the light, or alternatively to not have her focus directed at the light itself.
I do like cluttered compositions but the positioning of the other items dont work too well for me either. The ladder is too far left and would have been better placed more towards the middle .. where it would give better balance. I do like the wire though.
Outfit and model are both excellent and I quite like the dressed up feel in a dressed down location ...
Overall a very good shot but not as good as you are capable of in my opinion.
Dan
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