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This is an accidental photo. I dug up an old photo, played layers on PS, and then I thought what it would look like as B&W. Without flatten the layers, I went straight to B&W layer, it came out like this. It still kept some colour but lost most of the blue. I don't know why, you might be able to tell meSmile.. I gave up the idea of B&W, it seemed that he was more standing out with a bit colour. I'll put the coloured version on MOD for you to have a look... Thanks for looking, all comments, criticisms are welcome.
He was building a big wheel in Basel. I quite the smoke...Grin

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:EF-S18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:22 Oct 2011 - 2:17 PM
Focal Length:90mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.4
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:-1.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Partial
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:As Shot
Title:At work
Username:xwang xwang
Uploaded:26 Jan 2013 - 11:55 PM
Tags:General, Man smoke, Roof, Window
Votes:Voting Disabled
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nonur
nonur e2 Member 6nonur vcard Turkey8 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jan 2013 - 12:47 AM

Nice, I like it, and it is much better than the original.

Hermanus
Hermanus  2 South Africa
27 Jan 2013 - 4:24 AM

A great image you have created here Jasmine SmileGrinGrin

LynneJoyce
LynneJoyce e2 Member 6LynneJoyce vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jan 2013 - 7:27 AM

The desaturated version does look Better Jasmine. I like the steamy breath.

headskiesfly
headskiesfly e2 Member 11headskiesfly vcard Austria
27 Jan 2013 - 9:25 AM

I agree, it's much better.
Rick

NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43667 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom107 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jan 2013 - 9:27 AM

The modification seems very harsh whilst the original is very soft, although not much work is getting done..

Regards Nathan Grin

leontari
leontari e2 Member 2leontari vcard Greece
27 Jan 2013 - 9:28 AM


Quote: Nice, I like it, and it is much better than the original.

It works very well as mono Jasmine
Effrossini

Tibetan
Tibetan  2 England
27 Jan 2013 - 10:01 AM

I think it's fine like it! regards Leon.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

PaulLiley
PaulLiley  5 United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jan 2013 - 11:16 AM

Like the smoke yes it adds to the atmosphere. and the colour works well amongst the mono image. This is a great idea for other images you might have Jasmine- the experiment works for me. but the smoke makes it. Paul

paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jan 2013 - 12:40 PM

The colour original is heavily under exposed, I assume as you wanted to retain the back light halo. The part desaturated version is much better and stops just short of loosing contrast. He looks to be using a mobile phone. Yes, good candid and an interesting treatment which has made something worth while from the original.

Paul

Philip_H
Philip_H  2 United Kingdom
27 Jan 2013 - 12:52 PM

Well spotted and captured, Jasmine.

P.

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