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Leszno - Polska / Poland.

Spontaneous street portrait.

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Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Lens:Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Focal Length:130
Aperture:f/4
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
ISO:200
Flash:no
Title:Autumn
Username:Szturmowiec Szturmowiec
Uploaded:5 Nov 2012 - 6:14 PM
Tags:Autumn, Bike, Black & white, Fog, Poland
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peterthowe
peterthowe e2 Member 6peterthowe vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2012 - 6:21 PM

It's a great pity that I can't vote on this pictute. A great image, well done. Pete

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Franko59
Franko59 e2 Member 3Franko59 vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2012 - 6:23 PM

Great capture,,,regards Ian

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Bonvilston
5 Nov 2012 - 6:32 PM

love this shot. Composition is just perfect. What was it like in colour ?...Peter

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marktc
marktc e2 Member 346 forum postsmarktc vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2012 - 7:25 PM

A superb and wonderful composition, beautiful light and wonderful timing with the falling leaves

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MandyG
MandyG  2 England
5 Nov 2012 - 7:27 PM

I really want to vote on this. JUST WONDERFUL! SmileSmileSmile
Would like to have seen it in colour too.
MandyG

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pablophotographer

Excellent timing, colouring, framing and composition. Congratulations Szturmowiec.

Long live Gmoch!

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peaceshooter
5 Nov 2012 - 7:41 PM

great light and framing.

dave

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2795 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2012 - 7:52 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

An excellent shot, and obviously popular. The scene is gorgeous, the timing perfect for the man on the bike, the exposure great for a silhouette.

A question, more than a comment, - there are many black spots on the shot, including, lower right, what appears to be a water drop. Was it shot through a car window, or was there some rain, or was the lens in need of a clean? Its worth cleaning these up as its such a good image.


Its possible to use the highlight tool in Photoshop CS to improve or enhance the light rays by reducing the light reflection, - Ive done this in the mod, and cleaned up the spots.

What do you think about cropping a little from the left, so we see only the large tree, the road, and the man?


Regards


Willie

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fazzer
fazzer e2 Member 528 forum postsfazzer vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2012 - 7:58 PM

excellent love it

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Leilani
Leilani  929 forum posts England3 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2012 - 9:19 PM

Brilliant! Love the scene and especially the falling leaves! Fabulous capture Smile

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stu8fish
stu8fish  1 United Kingdom
5 Nov 2012 - 9:44 PM

Yea. That "rocks" even sooc.

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
6 Nov 2012 - 9:24 AM

Very nice moody shot.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
7 Nov 2012 - 10:02 PM

This is a critique section and only Willie has said the obvious. This has the basis of a superb composition but it has loads of strange black dots, some other artefacts and about a stop over exposure.

Please, don't just look at content, look at technique and processing.

Is your sensor that dirty. It would have to be terribly so to show at f4. So is it through a window which was rather dirty?

Paul

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