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My last image, An Honest View, was contentious compositionally and I appreciate all the comments which were so helpful and carefully thought out by so many.
I am particularly indebted to Stephen {Tooth} for his critique in which he managed to put into words what I think I had misgivings about.
Today's snap is hopefully less so.........a view of the autumn beeches by the White Cart Water in Pollok Country Park.

Ronnie.

Camera:Sony NEX-7
Lens:Sony 18-55mm.
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Focal Length:22mm.
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.00
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture
Metering Mode:Pattern
Flash:No
White Balance:Auto
Title:"Autumn by the White Cart Water"
Username:RonnieAG RonnieAG
Uploaded:24 Oct 2012 - 12:04 AM
Tags:Autumn colours, Glasgow, Landscape / travel, Pollok country park, White Cart Water.
Votes:Voting Disabled

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annettep38
annettep38 e2 Member 2186 forum postsannettep38 vcard France30 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 12:09 AM

the colours of honey and sunshine, green leaves and ripe fruit..
an autumn symphony, a bit melancholic but that is the theme of the season.

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achieverswales
24 Oct 2012 - 12:21 AM

Sorry Ronnie I cannot agree that this is a snap, it is a well thought out composed and exposed beautiful Autumnal capture, excellent my friend.

Regards

Trev.

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debu
debu  4 India
24 Oct 2012 - 12:36 AM

Excellent capture.
debu

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taggart
taggart e2 Member 942 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 1:02 AM

Your autumnal colors are wonderful this year as the capture shows!

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Jocelia
Jocelia e2 Member 2Jocelia vcard Australia1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 2:05 AM

Again Ronnie, a beautiful spot and an excellent shot…….
Top marks……

Jocelia…...Wink

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prabhusinha
prabhusinha e2 Member 6prabhusinha vcard India3 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 2:12 AM

Colorful canopy of Autumn.

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EAS
EAS e2 Member 5EAS vcard Scotland13 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 2:14 AM

Light and colours are beautiful. Love the texture and detail in the LH tree trunk too.

Ann

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Hermanus
Hermanus  1 South Africa
24 Oct 2012 - 5:14 AM

Masterful artistic photo - you are busy stirring some creative juices in me - I would love to paint his scene although I have not touched a paintbrush in many moons Smile

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CarolG
CarolG e2 Member 7124 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece16 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 6:15 AM

Beautiful colours in the trees, Ronnie, another fine composition and capture. Carol

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johnjo58
johnjo58 e2 Member 3johnjo58 vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 6:43 AM

Lovely photo Ronnie, so great to see someone looking for help and getting it and receiving it in such a gracious way. Well done Ronnie and everyone who supported you;Ephotozine at its best
David

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fentiger
fentiger e2 Member 12915 forum postsfentiger vcard England22 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 7:06 AM

Like Trev I do take exception to the word snap, to get and present this fine image has required a fair degree of thought and skill.

Albert

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jdinne
jdinne e2 Member 10jdinne vcard England
24 Oct 2012 - 7:09 AM

Wonderfully composed photograph Ronnie (not a snap Smile), as I said yesterday great photographic skills at work and this has been thought out. The colours are brilliant.

John

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Lillian
Lillian e2 Member 4Lillian vcard United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 7:24 AM

Beautifully shot Ronnie
autumn at it's best and has such a golden glow to this
Lillian

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SUE118
SUE118 e2 Member 5SUE118 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 7:36 AM

Autumn at it's best and you've captured it superbly.

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CaroleS
CaroleS e2 Member 329 forum postsCaroleS vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 7:45 AM

Now this composition is spot on Ronnie, a superb shot.
Carole

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EMJAYCEE
EMJAYCEE e2 Member 4EMJAYCEE vcard England9 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 8:13 AM

Like the composition with the branches hiding the bland sky and the autumn colour is excellent.
Joan.

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WhiteRose1
WhiteRose1 e2 Member 4963 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England129 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 8:40 AM

A beautiful snap, Ronnie. I was going to deconstruct it but my wife has just walked in and seen it and said, 'that's really nice'. I don't think even I've had that accolade from her so I'll just leave it at that.Smile

Dave

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PaulLiley
PaulLiley  4 United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 9:13 AM

Beautifully composed. Like the arch of Autumnal colours. Great work Ronnie. Paul

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PhillipMinnis
PhillipMinnis e2 Member 485 forum postsPhillipMinnis vcard Australia4 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 9:52 AM

What a beautiful Autumn scene, Ronnie! Wonderful colours and composition! Water always adds value to Autumn colours. Smile


Cheers

Phil

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digital_boi
24 Oct 2012 - 9:56 AM

hmmm think i know this tree it is becoming a feature on this site TongueTongue fine autumnal colours and reflections a pleasure to view

GrahamGrinGrinGrin

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unicorn17
unicorn17  5 Old Username was gilbo Scotland
24 Oct 2012 - 10:29 AM

Autumn leaves water and reflections well composed ! Lovely to see. Gill

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barbarahirst
barbarahirst e2 Member 5barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 10:52 AM

great comp and such wonderful colours you hve caught

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 3Irishkate vcard United Kingdom70 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 11:19 AM

Your beautiful autumn tree is a frame in itself and makes a wonderful image.
Can't get enough of these colours.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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IanBurton
IanBurton  460 forum posts United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 11:53 AM

A very well executed image. You've used the structure of the branches overhead and the tree trunk to frame the image and create a strong comp. The autumn colour of the beeches really finishes it off.
Ian

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rayme330
rayme330 e2 Member 2rayme330 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 12:10 PM

More autumn splendour well captured, Ronnie.

Ray

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mikbee
mikbee e2 Member 7mikbee vcard Scotland7 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 1:30 PM

Just super colours Ronnie !!
Excellent shot.
Mick.

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xwang
xwang  431 forum posts7 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 1:44 PM

Wonderful autumn view.. beautifully taken. I love the brightness of the image..the colour is superb, beautiful composition.

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pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly e2 Member 7282 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 1:48 PM

Lovely shot but I might have taken out the trunk of the tree, a huge improvement to yesterday's which was good - this one IS better

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TrevBatWCC
TrevBatWCC e2 Member 5TrevBatWCC vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 2:43 PM

Just love the autumn colours, and a super capture of them here, Ronnie Wink
Trev Smile

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morpheus1955
morpheus1955 e2 Member 7morpheus1955 vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 3:02 PM

Beautiful autumnal shot, beautifully composed and captured, fabulous colours and light, definitely not a snap, but a beautifully crafted image SmileSmileSmile

Hugh

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sable
sable  5 England7 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 3:45 PM

What an exceptional Autumn shot - I love it - so well composed and captured - the colours and detail are spot on - Elizabeth xx

p.s. thank you for your users award to my to-day's upload xx

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sweetpea62
sweetpea62 e2 Member 3sweetpea62 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 5:00 PM

A beautiful autumn shot Ronnie..Lin

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mashwood10
mashwood10 e2 Member 2mashwood10 vcard United Kingdom
24 Oct 2012 - 5:23 PM

Simply gorgeous Ronnie.GrinGrin

Pam

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JohnChambersPhotography

Nice detail on the bark Ronnie, lovely autumn colours well captured.

John

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8683 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1529 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 5:41 PM


Quote: you are busy stirring some creative juices in me

Hermanus echoes my thoughts, the scene lends itself to an easel, canvas and brushes, and the water looks wonderful behind the canopy of autumn leaves.

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lifesnapper
lifesnapper e2 Member 7lifesnapper vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 5:48 PM

Wonderful view point Ronnie, smashing!

John Smile

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BIGRY1
BIGRY1 e2 Member 2BIGRY1 vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 6:43 PM

Excellent colour and comp!GrinGrinGrinGrinGrin
Ryan

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NeilWigan
NeilWigan e2 Member 3NeilWigan vcard England15 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 6:55 PM

It is the essence of autumn.

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JOKEN
JOKEN  5 United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 7:11 PM

Snap it is not. - it is a very fine shot of autumn.
Ken

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Fefe
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24 Oct 2012 - 7:24 PM

GrinGrinGrin Top snapWinkGrin
Diane

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Badgerfred
Badgerfred e2 Member 6Badgerfred vcard Wales
24 Oct 2012 - 7:30 PM

Beautiful image Ronnie,
Fred.

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Billyray
Billyray  670 forum posts United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 8:19 PM

This is an excellent shot Ronnie. Superb colour and a cracking viewpoint.
Ray

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BarbaraR
BarbaraR  7 England1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 8:42 PM

Lovely composition and colours.
Such a pretty autumn/water scene.

B.

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Brian65
Brian65 e2 Member 4Brian65 vcard United Kingdom
24 Oct 2012 - 9:24 PM

Its a cracker Ronnie, love those colours and comp.
Brian

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Tibetan
Tibetan  1 England
25 Oct 2012 - 5:27 PM

Spot on Ronnie like that a lot, well done m8 nice one, regards Leon.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

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bobsblues
bobsblues e2 Member 4bobsblues vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
25 Oct 2012 - 6:43 PM

Top class shot Ronnie love the autumn colours.Smile
Rob

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lesliea
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26 Oct 2012 - 1:50 AM

Beautiful image Ronnie.
Allen,Smile

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jujupops
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26 Oct 2012 - 3:12 PM

Beautiful Grin
Julie

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Glostopcat
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29 Oct 2012 - 6:09 PM

A lovely peaceful autumnal scene with a fine array of colours recorded

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YorkshireSam
1 Nov 2012 - 12:07 PM

You seem to have taken full advantage of the breaks in the weather to catch some nice autumn colour Ronnie with several fine coppery leaved images now in your collection but it is this one that has the greatest appeal to me.

Excellent work !

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