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Autumn over Coniston Water

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A rare sunny day in Autumn, tried to make the most of it.

Camera:Sony A350
Lens:18-70mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Autumn over Coniston Water
Username:Hemmers Hemmers
Uploaded:2 Dec 2010 - 7:53 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Emu72
Emu72  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
2 Dec 2010 - 8:05 PM

Horizon first and foremost appears to be leaning to the left, I have not checked it but would say it is out by 1 degree.

Otherwise a lovely capture, I would have liked to see more of the shadow of the trees in the f/g also, but otherwise an excellent shot.

Regards
Tim

Last Modified By Emu72 at 2 Dec 2010 - 8:05 PM

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Jestertheclown
2 Dec 2010 - 10:45 PM

Landscapes aren't really my thing but I do rather like this.
To cope with the brightness of the sky in the background the camera has exposed it in such a way that the foreground shadows are very dark. I've uploaded a mod. in which I've simply tweaked it using the shadows/highlights tool.
I placed the ruler across the horizon and I'm not sure that it needs adjusting. If it does, it's by the tiniest margin. I've a feeling that the crooked trees, particularly the one on the right might be causing an optical ilusion.
I also applied autotone, although again, I'm not sure it's an improvement and I've sharpened it just a tiny bit.
All done in CS5.
Hope it's OK.

Bren.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2010 - 4:33 PM

I get the feeling of a slight lean, but this is very simple and very nice. A very good image.

paul

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