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Main Alter/Window at Bath Abbey.

Focal length 13mm; ISO 100; 1/8sec @ f/5.0; no flash.

How can this be improved please? or any other honest criticism.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:10-20mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:27 Feb 2013 - 1:37 PM
Focal Length:13mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.8
Aperture:f/5.0
Shutter Speed:1/8sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:As Shot
Title:Bath Abbey
Username:Animator Animator
Uploaded:2 Mar 2013 - 8:19 PM
Tags:Abbey, Alter, Architecture, Bath, Stained glass, Window
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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.
banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
2 Mar 2013 - 9:04 PM

Its a very small image to get a good look at the details, but overall seems good. Would suggest using f.8 so you use an area of the lens wide better edge to edge sharpness; toning down the highlights through the windiws can improves it as does a little sharpening. Look like it needs the tiniest of clockwise rotations.


Ive uploaded a mod with a few tweaks as suggested. This is the type of image that very well suited to the HDR approach, On a tripod, aperture priority, manual focus, take aboyt 7 shouts, each one separated by a stop, using ypur exposure comp control. Then combine them as RAW files in Photoshop. It can make a very nice image, as you get all the shadow detail, and no blown highlights, - the windows would be terrific,



regards


Willie

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