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Beach combing at a Snail's pace

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This little snail was embarking on an epic journey across the beach at sunset.

Camera:Nikon D40 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Beach combing at a Snail's pace
Username:tressypittkerby tressypittkerby
Uploaded:9 Aug 2010 - 8:23 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, General, Wildlife / nature
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kaybee
kaybee  93699 forum posts Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
9 Aug 2010 - 11:01 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Lovely lighting and I like the curve of the crabs footprints.

I would be inclined to crop out the seaweed and shadows to concentrate on the crab and take it off the central point

Last Modified By kaybee at 9 Aug 2010 - 11:02 AM

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lobsterboy
lobsterboy Site Moderator 1013937 forum postslobsterboy vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
9 Aug 2010 - 12:57 PM

I would be inclined to crop it slightly differently - just an idea.

Chris

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tressypittkerby

I really like both the crops. Thanks. Tress

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paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
9 Aug 2010 - 6:08 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A first class idea, but does need to be rather lighter, and i would come in very much closer on the snail, position it on a bottom third, then use the trail to lead into the picture.

Paul

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