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Sony A200 raw photoshop cs3
| Title: | Beautiful yellow |
| Username: | 
digiphotography |
| Uploaded: | 6 May 2010 - 1:36 PM |
| Camera: | Sony A200 |
| Lens: | sony |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Tags: | Ailedda, Close-up / macro, Color, Dattler, Delia, Flower, Flowers & plants, General, Nature, Petals, Photographer, Photography, Photoshop, Plant, Texture, White |
| Votes: | Voting Disabled |
 | Critique Wanted |
| Modifications Welcome (Upload a Modification) |
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technically well executed; nice composition along with colour theme, not too sure about the semi translusant bubbles though..
perfectly good image without them.
more personal preference than critiuqe.
uploaded mod with levels adjusted to highlight the bubbles and pointed a few out.
regards
john
Punchy/powerful use of colour really like the absract approach and composition ....
I Guess the bubbles/Droplets are down to the individual viewer?
Rick B
Welcome to EPZ Delia.
Nice first upload.
The basic shot is good, - perhaps a little over sharpened at the stem, and under sharpened where the water drops are.
The background fill with the balls/bubbles are a matter of personal preference really. From a commercial shot perspective they probably work, but from a composition perspective they do tend to distract from the flower, which is framed and composed very well.
Ive loaded 2 mods, - both without bubbles to see the difference, - one with a white bg, the other with the same gradient you used. In both Ive sharpened the drops, and used a different, larger, more open frame which might work better. I end up personally preferring the versions without the added bbbles, - but as I said, - its a personal choice.
Hope this is helpful, - and remember to provide you shot settings next time you upload for critique.
regards
Willie
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