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another from the Beckie fashion shoot
taking around Brighton there will be one more to this set 2mo
thanks for taking time to look and your comments are always welcome
I like the 'sort of' heart shape behind her - it gives a nice frame.
Two things I am not so keen on though ...... did you get her mid blink? (the eyes don't look fully opened). Also you are losing detail in the dress and it is blocking out (but I am sure there is detail in the original that you can recover)
Thanks roy the eyes i ask her tohave then a bit close but you are right about the details i have to have a look at the org
Si ( really must get a prof reader as i think my eyes need testing again)
There's a lot to like about this. The biggest 'issue' for me is the black on black which would have been improved by moving her a couple of feet to the left (her right) but it's always worth checking your model's outfit and hair against whatever you intend posing them against. It's amazingly easy to lose things into the background. I'm pleased to see that in this shot you've given your subject some room I know I'm a bit hard on you with regards your cropping but it makes a lot of difference. The pose is spot on and the intensity of her stare is perfect once you appreciate that her eyes are in fact open. Nice one.
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