Login or Join Now

Upload your photos, chat, win prizes and much more

Username:
Password:
Remember Me

Can't Access your Account?

New to ePHOTOzine? Join ePHOTOzine for free!

Beckie #74

Join Now

Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!

Add Comment

another from the Beckie fashion shoot

taking around Brighton there will be one more to this set 2mo

thanks for taking time to look and your comments are always welcome

Si Smile

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:18-55
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Beckie #74
Username:Simon-Gimson Simon-Gimson
Uploaded:14 Jun 2008 - 9:51 AM
Tags:Beckie jo, Brighton, Fashion, Gimson, Nude / glamour, People, Portraits / people, Urban fashion
VS Mode Rating 100 (33.33% won)
These stats show the percentage of wins and the rating score that your photo has achieved. You can go to the VS Mode by clicking on this icon.

Signup to e2

Signup to e2 to see which photo this has won or lost against in the vs mode
Votes:27

Comments

Diana
Diana e2 Member 72011 forum postsDiana vcard Netherlands19 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jun 2008 - 9:59 AM

nice angle

Dianna

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

Simon-Gimson
14 Jun 2008 - 10:03 AM

thanks Dianna


Si Smile

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

kaybee
kaybee  103793 forum posts Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jun 2008 - 11:06 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Morning Simon.

I like the 'sort of' heart shape behind her - it gives a nice frame.

Two things I am not so keen on though ...... did you get her mid blink? (the eyes don't look fully opened). Also you are losing detail in the dress and it is blocking out (but I am sure there is detail in the original that you can recover)


Roy

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

Simon-Gimson
14 Jun 2008 - 11:13 AM

Thanks roy the eyes i ask her tohave then a bit close but you are right about the details i have to have a look at the org
cheers



Si ( really must get a prof reader as i think my eyes need testing again)

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

xanda
xanda  10244 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jun 2008 - 7:13 PM

There's a lot to like about this. The biggest 'issue' for me is the black on black which would have been improved by moving her a couple of feet to the left (her right) but it's always worth checking your model's outfit and hair against whatever you intend posing them against. It's amazingly easy to lose things into the background. I'm pleased to see that in this shot you've given your subject some room Smile I know I'm a bit hard on you with regards your cropping but it makes a lot of difference. The pose is spot on and the intensity of her stare is perfect once you appreciate that her eyes are in fact open. Nice one.

Simon.

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

Simon-Gimson
14 Jun 2008 - 7:44 PM

Thanks Simon



Si Smile

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

- Original Poster Comments
- Your Posts

Add a Comment

You must be a member to leave a comment

Username:
Password:
Remember me:
Un-tick this box if you want to login each time you visit.