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Taken in October at Tee Pee Point Park, Tiny Township,

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S3400
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:5 Oct 2011 - 3:27 PM
Focal Length:120.4mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/20.0
Shutter Speed:1/120sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Beside still waters
Username:Relic01 Relic01
Uploaded:24 Feb 2012 - 8:28 PM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel
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ams99
ams99 Junior Member 265 forum posts England9 Constructive Critique Points
24 Feb 2012 - 8:45 PM

Apologies. I may be slow on the uptake but what is it in the water?

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Relic01  2 Canada
24 Feb 2012 - 9:29 PM

Ahh, it's a small mooring bouy in Penetangs outer channel, Georgian Bay, Ontario

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Relic01  2 Canada
25 Feb 2012 - 11:57 AM

I am hoping for some feedback on the positioning of the buoy and how the contrast may be increased. Thoughts?

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Jestertheclown
25 Feb 2012 - 12:12 PM

Hi Mike,

To be brutally honest, it's not the most interesting shot I've ever seen.
You can improve the position of the buoy within the shot by cropping the RHS and the bottom to place it on a third, which a lot of people consider to be important and you can increase the contrast in various ways. A check using levels shows that it's a bit overexposed, which is easily dealt with in software. I simply used "auto levels." Just doing that improves it a little.
Sorry if that all sounds very negative.
I've added a mod.
Bren.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 25 Feb 2012 - 12:13 PM

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Relic01  2 Canada
25 Feb 2012 - 12:16 PM

Not negative at all. Without feedback how do we learn? You're right it is a bit blah of a shot. Still trying to find my way! lol. Thank you very much.

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Jestertheclown
25 Feb 2012 - 12:27 PM

Cheers Mike,

You're portfolio tells us that you can do better.

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