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Arrived just before sunrise - I know its been done before but not by me! Wanted to capture the beautiful early morning colours - shame the sky is a bit boring.
0.9 ND Grad, tripod, remote release.

Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:sigma 10-20mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Blea Tarn Sunrise
Username:geffers7 geffers7
Uploaded:12 Nov 2010 - 11:07 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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mikesmith
mikesmith e2 Member 945 forum postsmikesmith vcard United Kingdom35 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2010 - 11:22 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Yes it's been done before...I alone must have uploaded 20 similar uploads. This for me is good but maybe you might have been better being lower down so that the foreground rock was more or less at lens level. That would have reduced the effective gap between the rocks and the middle distant reflection of the trees...that just seems a little too much space at the moment. A tweak to levels and curves may also give the shot a little more "punch" to it and this more impact.

Hope the cc helps a bit and don't forget, that's only my opinion Wink
Mike

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geffers7
geffers7 e2 Member 334 forum postsgeffers7 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2010 - 11:36 AM

Thanks Mike - I think you are right about getting down low but it only occured to me whilst processing the image - there is too much water I agree.
I have played around with the image in elements (with a variety of technicolour results!) but the colours here are how best I remembered it - if you get a minute post a mod and I'll see what you mean.

Geoff

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born2bongo
born2bongo e2 Member 529 forum postsborn2bongo vcard England
12 Nov 2010 - 12:14 PM

Don't agree about the water line - it just looks like the bank curves towards the viewer on the left. The far left tree is definitely closer than those towards the centre of the picture. The sky looks strangely murky, though.

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geffers7
geffers7 e2 Member 334 forum postsgeffers7 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2010 - 12:50 PM

Thanks for your comments - the sky is natural - there was a pinkish tinge towards the horizon. I haven't changed an awful lot in Elements - just upped the saturation and contrast a little.
The image was level as I always use a spirit level - the bank of the Tarn curves towards the left.
Thanks for the mod Mike - I did try to boost the colour at first but it didn't print very well so I toned it down a bit - your mod looks good on screen.

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Jestertheclown
12 Nov 2010 - 11:56 PM

I know nothing about landscapes but for me, there's far too much foreground and the colours, the trees and that wonderful reflection are too distant and therefore it's hard to see any detail in them.
The top half of this, with a litle also trimmed fro the top makes a wonderful, albeit very traditional, landscape.

Just my opinion.

Bren.

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geffers7
geffers7 e2 Member 334 forum postsgeffers7 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2010 - 4:44 PM

Thanks for your comments Bren - as mentioned above I think I should have shot from lower down to cut out some of the water in the foreground. It has printed pretty well however.

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MrBlueSky
MrBlueSky e2 Member 6MrBlueSky vcard United Kingdom
16 Nov 2010 - 10:36 AM

Yep, think you were trying to make the best of the conditions like me. Spent the next 2 hours trying (and failing) to get over hardknot pass. Eventually got to Wasdale head though.

Nice shot BTW - with the lack of cloud, its probably best to concetrate on a smaller area (or crop). I had to.

All the Best

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